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Allmost time for bed
Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 10:04 am
by Jaberwocky
Wow, I just read the rating I got so far, a really nice surprise!
Thanks everyone for voting!
I guess there are a few Milovana memebers like me who sometimes have a 'hard' time falling asleep.
Re: Allmost time for bed
Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 6:51 pm
by camipco
Great tease, I really enjoyed it, thank you.
I have one quibble: in the first sentence, I think you mean "competition."
The metronome is a really effective tool for teasing. Normally I'm not a fan of slow stroking, but being slowed down one step at the time like that worked great.
Re: Allmost time for bed
Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 7:30 pm
by Jaberwocky
Thanks, have corrected the it right away.
Re: Allmost time for bed
Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 10:45 pm
by dark
I just read the order to brush your teeth and laughed my ass of
Only jab knows why
Re: Allmost time for bed
Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 1:54 am
by camipco
dark wrote:I just read the order to brush your teeth and laughed my ass of
Only jab knows why
That deserves a poll, don't you think?
http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=2177
Re: Allmost time for bed
Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 8:35 am
by Jaberwocky
Oh my god, a poll because of a single order in my tease...
I have absolutely no idea what to think of this
To Dark -> I just wanted to make your mother proud
To those who do not brush -> shame on you!
(next time, I'll be a little more precise, for those who have brushed their teeth just before starting this tease)
Re: Allmost time for bed
Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 2:31 pm
by rbtheservant
Jaberwocky wrote:Oh my god, a poll because of a single order in my tease...
I have absolutely no idea what to think of this
To Dark -> I just wanted to make your mother proud
To those who do not brush -> shame on you!
(next time, I'll be a little more precise, for those who have brushed their teeth just before starting this tease)
Jaberwocky,
From someone who has never recieved any feedback from a tease, I would take the poll as a badge of honor! Please continue the great work!
Re: Allmost time for bed
Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 12:19 am
by eteased
That was a great tease. I'm always happy to see people using the metronome... I really like how it takes away a bit more of the reader's control over things. I also liked the pleasant tone of the story. Sometimes I really prefer that as opposed to having the woman constantly insulting me.
Re: Allmost time for bed
Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 5:50 pm
by Jaberwocky
rbtheservant wrote:Jaberwocky,
From someone who has never recieved any feedback from a tease, I would take the poll as a badge of honor! Please continue the great work!
Trust me, the feedback, the rating and the poll, it took me off guard, but I do enjoy it. It is really inspiring to write more teases. Unfortunatly I have a little much on my head at the moment.