Allmost time for bed

[Jaberwocky]

Wow, I just read the rating I got so far, a really nice surprise!
Thanks everyone for voting!

I guess there are a few Milovana memebers like me who sometimes have a 'hard' time falling asleep.

[camipco]

Great tease, I really enjoyed it, thank you.

I have one quibble: in the first sentence, I think you mean "competition."

The metronome is a really effective tool for teasing. Normally I'm not a fan of slow stroking, but being slowed down one step at the time like that worked great.

[Jaberwocky]

Thanks, have corrected the it right away.

[dark]

I just read the order to brush your teeth and laughed my ass of Only jab knows why

[camipco]

I just read the order to brush your teeth and laughed my ass of Only jab knows why

That deserves a poll, don't you think?

http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=2177

[Jaberwocky]

Oh my god, a poll because of a single order in my tease...
I have absolutely no idea what to think of this
To Dark -> I just wanted to make your mother proud
To those who do not brush -> shame on you!

(next time, I'll be a little more precise, for those who have brushed their teeth just before starting this tease)

[rbtheservant]

Oh my god, a poll because of a single order in my tease...
I have absolutely no idea what to think of this
To Dark -> I just wanted to make your mother proud
To those who do not brush -> shame on you!

(next time, I'll be a little more precise, for those who have brushed their teeth just before starting this tease)

Jaberwocky,

From someone who has never recieved any feedback from a tease, I would take the poll as a badge of honor! Please continue the great work!

[eteased]

That was a great tease. I'm always happy to see people using the metronome... I really like how it takes away a bit more of the reader's control over things. I also liked the pleasant tone of the story. Sometimes I really prefer that as opposed to having the woman constantly insulting me.

[Jaberwocky]

Jaberwocky,
From someone who has never recieved any feedback from a tease, I would take the poll as a badge of honor! Please continue the great work!

Trust me, the feedback, the rating and the poll, it took me off guard, but I do enjoy it. It is really inspiring to write more teases. Unfortunatly I have a little much on my head at the moment.