No cheating
Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 5:18 am
I've got another tease up, and I think it's pretty damn good. What do you think?
Definately your best effort. You have really improved. The story was good and i absolutely loved the ending, definately my style
You can still improve of course, like everyone, i think with this tease you should have teased the guy without letting him touch for just a bit longer, just so that he was desperate to follow instructions no matter how frustrating. Also, i have had feedback for my latest tease that you shouldnt change location too much or it disrupts the fantasy. I think thats where this kind of tease fell down.
But, thats their opinion, I thought it was an awesome tease.
In my opinion the best teases dont let the guy cum at the end, because thats what they are there for.... To tease
