Im Martine by Spain lugo
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 5:19 am
This is a message for the author of this tease. This is a VERY good, quality tease. Good work on it. The only thing holding me back on adding it to my favorites is the English. There are a few parts that are almost beyond comprehension (understanding). It needs a little bit of editing, and I wouldn't mind helping you out with it. If you wouldn't object to it, I could correct the grammar of the tease and post my changes here so you can edit it and make it a truly five star tease.
Just say yes, and I will go ahead and start making these changes. Thanks Spain lugo!
Just say yes, and I will go ahead and start making these changes. Thanks Spain lugo!