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(Feedback) Hell with Mel part 2
Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:45 am
by str0be
Got part two up. Let me know what you think.
-str0be-
Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:31 am
by slavemo
it would be great to see that as a very long series!!!!!
Great job on the tease
great tease
Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 1:39 pm
by chastbelt
Wow,
a great tease ans a nice and cruel story.
i love it!
Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 7:52 pm
by Marke
Nice sense of foreboding and dread developing along with the constant edging.
Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:26 pm
by seb_soumis
Nice tease, thanks, I hope also to be a long serie
Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:52 pm
by str0be
Due to the feedback I'm recieving on this, I think I'll definately be doing more parts. How many will depend on how long I can go with decent ideas. (and of course good pics)
But keep the feedback coming, anything that people want to see (different kinks) please let me know.
-str0be-
Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:15 am
by ninety
Really good tease, I like the involvement with the storyline, rather than just stroke n times. Mel is a great model to use, very sexy, and lots of pics to choose from. Kinkwise it might be nice for Mel to have to reinforce she's in control with a bit of punishment, tied balls, nipple torture etc. I'm loving the lingerie wearing! Later she could ask her friends to help train you. I'll shut up though as it's your tease! (I am now thinking about writing my first, hopefully it'll go further than the other similar thoughts I've had!)