Hmmm... better... but not perfect.
Look at my firm, soft cleavage. Look how my heaving breasts are nearly bursting out of this tight basque... See how flawless and smooth my milky white skin is?
Don't you think a body as beautiful as mine deserves a perfect edge?
You are gripping your cock too hard when you stroke. Each touch should be as soft and gentle as my soft, smooth skin.
Try again.
Edge for my perfect cleavage. Softly, softly...