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Hi there folks :)

since my C.C. tease got a better rating than I expected I think I am going to continue making some more.
(by the way thanks :D )

Edit: I finally managed to do another tease, check it out I hope you enjoy it. :)

When you liked my work you can leave feedback down here.
Criticism is also appreciated so that I may know where I should improve but please let it be constructive. ^^

When you want you can also post suggestions which character I should do next. ;)

Anyway that should be it for now.
Thank you again for taking your time and doing my tease! <3

Very well written, I've never watched Code Geass though, so I can't compare it to the character or anything!~

I am glad to see another person making hentai teases. You could possibly go more in depth with decision making but I seem to be nitpicking.

Very good!

Probably not really my area of interest, but it was well done and I would certainly carry on with the writing/teasemaking if I were you. I would read more of your future work.

Yay for more of those teases!

Thank you very much for the positive feedback :D

Definitely going to make more now.
I just have to find a new charakter right now ^^'

I want to inform you, that the character you used is 15 years old. It's likely your tease is going to get removed. I recommend saving the pages.

Yes I know I already got a message concerning this.
I really forgot the policies ehen I did it and I truly apologize for that. ^^'
I am going to take another character and change the story so it fits if this is ok. :)

Edit: I changed the character and the story a bit and posted it again. I hope it's okay now.
If something still is inappropriate please let me know. ;)

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Your new tease is fun^^

But the challenge route is REAL hard, kudos to anyone who manages to do that without cheating.

Thank you very much for the feedback. :)

I also think that the hard one is abit ...overkill ^^'
But I'm going to leave it like this for now maybe I will chnage it in the future. ;)

By all means, let it stay in. After a long time I failed at a tease. I'd rather try to improve myself to get through^^

Please do one with Revy, from Black lagoon. Google ."revy black lagoon" on google images.

Hm that's a good idea I think I will try it out ;)

Eofan wrote:Hm that's a good idea I think I will try it out ;)

u talkin about my request?