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Full marks for creating a slightly different tease but that model ! why would anyone want to mutilate their body like that. A complete turn-off for me I'm afraid.

One Mans idea of Mutilation is another Man's Idea of Perfection
But I do agree with the FULL MARKS for the Tease
Who wound not want to be HER Dog

this is the Beauty of this site that there is so many different Ideals of Beauty
What works for one, well not for everyone

Please continue with this tease I will be waiting

Full marks for grammar and punctuation, but the story wasn't all that appealing. Nothing new - its the same old tease that you've done before. It'd be nice to see something new, you're a great author!

ronin wrote:Nothing new - its the same old tease that you've done before.

I was actually considering writing something to that effect as the tease's description.

Boring story and long plain stroking made concentrating very hard. Allmost fell asleep on this tease I hope you got an ace in your sleeve to lift up this sites recent tease offering, as I know you got the talent for it.

ruinedoh wrote:

peedro wrote:Boring story and long plain stroking made concentrating very hard. Allmost fell asleep on this tease I hope you got an ace in your sleeve to lift up this sites recent tease offering, as I know you got the talent for it.

Why don't you try writing a tease for us to all enjoy?

That would be hilarious. My grammar added to my imagination would be absolutely horrible.

I'm sorry if I offended you, but it was just my opinion. You two should not spoil us with your quality teases!

Great work yet again 1885

I kinda agree with the other remarks though, excellent as your work always is, a slight touch of new elements would been good - the teases and stories are fantastic, as is the use of pictures... But the stroking/edging patterns are getting very predictable and therefore lets it down ever so slightly