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I enjoyed your tease as always. Again a rating of 5 from me

Your teases rely more on story/immersion and remind me sometimes of the master (1885) itself. So it's a huge compliment to your writing and a hope you will continue to create such great teases.

On this tease i found a minor bug i think: page63 uses suddenly without any indication a random image (*.jpg). It's the only page on the whole tease and it doesn't fit the rest. So maybe you did forget to assign a picture to this page.

Suggestions for the rest of the series? I would say: stay with lindsay. I like it if a tease series creates the illusion of an ongoing "personal relationship" between viewer and model. And there are so much nice sets with lindsay available out there (including some sets together with the "ex-girlfriend" britney). Some of my favourites are seen here. You could also add a bit of light pain and maybe even tasks for the time "between" the different teases. My last suggestion would be: Release also a version for TeaseMe. I play them for myself mostly in TeaseMe after i replaced the low resolution pictures from the online tease, but sometimes i'm missing the right set for the tease.

I just finished your new tease and I really liked it, it was a smooth introduction to what might be in store for the "teasee" and the best part for me is, I really stopped at the end and got dressed (normally I tend to think "screw it" and continue anyway ).

So great work there and I'm excited about what's coming up next.

And since you're already asking for suggestions: My biggest one would have to be the same d3vi0n already mentioned: Stick with Lindsay - the reason for that is the same, too - the personal relation AND I always thought of teases with tons of different girls they seem to me like some kind of show with the viewer in a humiliating situation with all the girls ordering him/her around...personally I'm not into humiliation to enjoy that kind of tease even if this bunch of girls is spread out in multiple parts of the tease...the slight humiliation being with one single girl for which she makes you do stuff you end up doing with a little grin and think "you little bitch" is IMHO just the right amount. And with Lindsay in the tease I think I would enjoy that part .

Moreover, the idea of tasks between the actual parts of the tease seem like another great idea to me. It would make the whole series more dynamic and leave the viewer with a more intense feeling of denial, I suppose.

Somehow I just rewrote your post, d3vi0n, but I just wanted to support your ideas .

As I said in the other topic:

I would love to see a series for starters, that start with a few days experience and maybe slowly climbing up

Just to chime in with what others have said, really great job. Both part 1 & 2 were outstanding. I agree with the idea of sticking with Lindsay.

As others have said I think you should stick with Lindsay she is smoking hot and it would make for a better experience if it was the same girl. Maybe if in dream state again then put a different girl for the dream but when awake always be Lindsay.

Love this tease by you. All of your teases are great and glad you came back to write because you got skills. Usually after tease and denial teases on here I deny myself for like a half hour then I am like meh I am just going to finish myself, but I want to do this series and actually experience what the tease says. Thank you for writing and can't wait for what this series has to come.

Only done the first tease, but will definitely do the other.

As for what I'd like to see, more pain, tasks, some humiliation - verbal and physical. And lots more teasing! :D

Maybe make us wear a chastity device between teases? For those that have them.

Great tease, great setup, great model(s), and a very good story this far. Really loved it - an easy 5 from me.


The challenge level is on the moderate side this far, at least regarding the edging, but as Nez said, it is nice to have a series that is more on an "entry level" too - this series is just perfect for beginners imo - clean and steady buildups with fairly mellow edging this far.

Looking forward to the future installments for sure.

And I hope someone with access to high res pics makes HD TeaseMe versions of the entire series when we get that far

Nice as always! :) Can you give a hint in which frequency you tend to publish this series.
Just so I don't get to eager to do this series, waiting for the next part to get published in a row every day!

Oh and for the direction you are going:
I really like it! Also the twists in the second day. I would just say, do not bring to many girls in. Three different models are max.
For me personally some humiliation and pain is OK. It could get a bit more, but I guess this will happen when the series intensifies. But I still have to agree with the posts before, It's nice that it is not to extrem for once.

Thanks

janmb wrote:And I hope someone with access to high res pics makes HD TeaseMe versions of the entire series when we get that far

At least the first 2 parts are uploaded now

love it ... ;) thank you very much ...

No need to apologize ;) thanks for your work. Looking forward to the ongoing series.

Nice 3rd part! Hope you can update frequently even with all the work that is needed, otherwise the week will be more like a month ,)

3rd part of the series by ruinedoh is published on Milovana. Because i already got questions per PM regarding a high resolution version for TeaseMe: I'm uploading it now including the video in high resolution (172 MB takes a while). I will update this post and TeaseMe-Thread as soon as upload is finished. Don't forget to rate the online version by ruinedoh! And please, don't expect me to convert every great tease on Milovana to TeaseMe. Way to much work even if i had all the needed pictures and videos in high resolution. It's just a happy coincidence and the fact i even didn't had to rename the high resolution pictures that this tease gets such an quick upload. No promises for the future.

Done:

BTW IF you want to watch the video on ios, you can do so here:
http://www.ipadporn.com/tablet/videos/l ... 19157.html

ruinedoh wrote:I could upload a tease me version as I finish it but the only reason why I haven't is I am not sure how to do it...

i can answer that

(1) import the tease from milovana.com with TeaseMe
(2) replace imported low-res pictures with high-res pictures
(3) optional: copy used video into subfolder for the tease
(4) optional: exit xml of the tease to play the video directly within TeaseMe
(5) upload tease on a filehoster and post link in forum

steps 3 and 4 are optional. You could take a look at the teaseme version of the 3rd part of your series as example how to integrate a video. Just open the xml and search for a page id starting with video.