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http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=17035

There are 2 easter eggs in the tease, related to a thread in the games forum, and a keyword that may be recognized by some... ; )

If it's too difficult, I was making it with a certain baseline in mind. If it's too easy, keep playing through the various paths, it will lead you back to the beginning and you can select a different path than before.

Feedback appreciated, thanks folks!

Any feedback? What can I do better?

I liked your tease. Has a lot of potential. I'm tempted to create an enhanced offline version for TeaseMe :)

What did work:
- the "boss fights" are amazing
- whole game concept is great

What could be enhanced:
- more levels till finish
- random images
- the stop pages should have a unique picture (so you don't have to read the text)
- add sounds to increase difficult in later levels (for example some female moaning)
- more "flavor text" on go pages
- maybe some "special events" in levels like edging or some mild pain

Thank you for the feedback! : ]

Overall this tease is a create one.
One thing I noticed. The stage boss of 1-C let you stroke a series of an amount of stroke in a given time (60st/30sec - 40st/20sec -40strokes/15 sec ... or whatever the stroke/time rate is but I hope you guys know what I mean). So the point is, ihmo this is to easy because in that time there is a great possibility to come but now way to ruin the orgasm.

Great tense and very well written. What are the Easter eggs? I believe I may have found one by mistake?

cocklocker wrote:Overall this tease is a create one.
One thing I noticed. The stage boss of 1-C let you stroke a series of an amount of stroke in a given time (60st/30sec - 40st/20sec -40strokes/15 sec ... or whatever the stroke/time rate is but I hope you guys know what I mean). So the point is, ihmo this is to easy because in that time there is a great possibility to come but now way to ruin the orgasm.

at that point I wanted to add something different to the tease, plus at that point, it's kinda like, you made it this far, why not try and not cum? I figured at that point in the game it would mess with people a little, should I go for the win, or just try and cum and end it here? how much farther is there to go? what else haven't I seen? that sorta thing.

thanks for the feedback

SidSidSid wrote:Great tense and very well written. What are the Easter eggs? I believe I may have found one by mistake?

if you think you've found one, just post it under a spoiler tag on here.

d3vi0n wrote:- the stop pages should have a unique picture (so you don't have to read the text)

I have seen this in another stop-and-go tease but in this tease I wouldn't go so far. However I would suggest a big red "stop." at the beginning of the text. So I can realize faster that I have to stop on that picture and once I have stopped I can read the remaining text if I like.

thanks for the feedback dracket! that is a good point for the future teases. appreciated.


if you enjoyed the webtease, would you mind helping me out by posting some pics on this thread?

http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=22&t=9195