Milovana.com

I just joined so I don't really know how the forums work or if it is legal to advertize your own things, but I made my first tease and I would like some critique and for people to check out out! ^^

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=17404

I am not sure if it is too hard or too easy, or if it is appealing. There just doesn't seem to be much 2D girl teases and I don't know if it's against the rules or not. ^^

Please tell me what you think, it's a little short.

Edit1: I made a second tease about Mami http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=17448

Please comment on that one as well!

Edit2: I made a third tease about Chie from Persona 4: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=17558

Please comment on that one as well... if you like, I mean whatever! ^^

Edit3: I made a fourth tease and changed the topic name, it's about Ika Masume: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=17595

Edit4: I made a fifth tease, It's about the K-on! girls! (all four of them in one tease!):
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=17781

Edit5: I made my FIRST flash tease, it's about Rise from Persona 4!:
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=18319

Comment and tell me if there is anything you like/should fix.

Edit: None of my teases exist anymore, sorry! They were all removed due to inappropriate content.

I LOVE Hentai/anime
so loved the tease

II think it would have flowed a bit smoother with a flash tease, instead of following directions to go to pages
but if you can't follow directions, what you doing looking at the tease? right?

hope to see more!

FYI I often post in forums to advertise or get feedback bout a tease
so don't be shy to do so!

SexualChoc wrote:I think it would have flowed a bit smoother with a flash tease, instead of following directions to go to pages
but if you can't follow directions, what you doing looking at the tease? right?

Oh I thought so as well! But I don't really know how to use the flash maker, but it would have worked a lot better, especially with timers and whatnot. In the future I will learn how to use the flash thing or work on more Classic friendly things. :> (Plus I don't really like the black background of the flash teases. Ew. -w-)

Anyone else?

I want more anime teases!! Anime tease are great and more of this is great!

I thought this was really good. Think hentai/anime can really be brought into teases in a good way and it was in this case. Plus liked the different conclusions if you failed at certain points or just made it to the end.

So yeah, great job.

I really appreciate the responses! (More than you think!)

I made a second tease, http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=17448

I don't think I should make another thread for it though, so here it is! You can comment on this one too, or whatever if you like.

Yep love it!

Some people might complain they are not flash and such, but they forgot the true essence of tease making! The stories might be short but the tease amount is just right. If you don't make it to the end you fail at the tease and denial and you deserve your orgasm to be ruined. :P

I still prefer the old-fashioned teases to the flash ones.

And I absolutely loved both of these. Not because I'm particularly an anime lover, but because the teasing and the writing were really great. I loved the multiple endings, as well as the 'voice' and the scenarios.

Please More
Thanking you so much for the effort and PLEASURE

I'll second that - looking forward to whatever you write next!

If anything I would suggest it would be nice if there was a chance to not cum at all, as well as ruined orgasms and the ideal ending.

A Mami tease? How interesting. The background of page 9 made me a bit worried though...

Say, did you watch the show? Because, if you haven't, I'd recommend you do.

Your writing style is great! I'm looking forward to your future teases. Please make more with anime girls =D

mae0314 wrote:A Mami tease? How interesting. The background of page 9 made me a bit worried though...

Say, did you watch the show? Because, if you haven't, I'd recommend you do.

Yes! I have watched the show, I was waiting for someone to notice! ^^; I actually edited the picture and moved it upward so it wouldn't show as much! I just thought it would be such an amazing picture for this tease. I mean like, "Duh, gun pointing at camera!" Maybe I should have done a better job. Maybe I will find a better picture eventually or blur it. I have seen the show, and it was amazing! ^^

I really appreciate the comments, guys! Really, I do! I appreciate private messages as well, ect. I will make another one eventually! <3 They definitely will feature hot anime girl butt. *w*

I LOVE Hentai/anime also

Your writing also made me very hot and I am not normally into pantys and feet.

I would also like to thank you for your time and effort in making these