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FB - Poolside

Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2012 6:32 pm
by 2OI2
Hey,

like I said, first tease... so inform me about bugs, errors or spelling mistakes.

And of course your opinion, if you like.

Thanks!

Re: FB - Poolside

Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:08 am
by Random2586
Good tease overall.

I reckon there should be a way to skip the 10 min break, but really my biggest complaint is most of the not so good answers ended the tease.

There was one part where she asked how badly I wanted to see her pussy, and I clicked "not so bad". I expected more teasing, but the tease ended instead. :( There are a few other areas where the tease ends if you click a button and it's a little annoying.

But don't get me wrong either -I wouldnt give the feed back if I hadn't liked it :)

So yeah, a few rough edges but a good effort ^^

Re: FB - Poolside

Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 10:46 am
by 2OI2
Thanks. Though it would be easier to write a tease - harder than I expected.

Have a look at "new" version. I think it has less "edges", as you mentioned.

Re: FB - Poolside

Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 4:28 pm
by remmy
I really like this tease. I can't wait to see the sequel.