FB - Long denial part 1
Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 2:58 pm
Okay, first of all, I think this tease series has a ton of potential. I've been looking for something like this for ages. By that I mean a tease that includes a long period in chastity. The only other series I can think of is DomTanya's surrender to chastity.
Anyway, there are a few issues for me with this tease. These are just personal things that I didn't like so maybe it's just me, but I wanted to leave my thoughts on this and see if anyone else agrees.
The thing that really ruined this tease for me was the extremely long waiting periods when nothing actually happened. This was most evident during the third girls section. It really just started to bore me and I quickly lost interest in finishing the tease. Until that point I'd been mostly enjoying it, but after that I found it really hard to keep going. I did make it to the end, but I stopped really obeying the instructions during the third girls section because I just got bored and wasn't into it anymore. It completely took me out of the mood. This was a real shame because the last girls section would have been really great, minus a few more really long timers.
Other than that I would say the tease was very good and like I said at the beginning it shows a lot of potential to be a great tease series. I really hope the author continues and hopefully sorts out the whole timer issue.
Anyway, there are a few issues for me with this tease. These are just personal things that I didn't like so maybe it's just me, but I wanted to leave my thoughts on this and see if anyone else agrees.
The thing that really ruined this tease for me was the extremely long waiting periods when nothing actually happened. This was most evident during the third girls section. It really just started to bore me and I quickly lost interest in finishing the tease. Until that point I'd been mostly enjoying it, but after that I found it really hard to keep going. I did make it to the end, but I stopped really obeying the instructions during the third girls section because I just got bored and wasn't into it anymore. It completely took me out of the mood. This was a real shame because the last girls section would have been really great, minus a few more really long timers.
Other than that I would say the tease was very good and like I said at the beginning it shows a lot of potential to be a great tease series. I really hope the author continues and hopefully sorts out the whole timer issue.