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Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 10:28 am
by tBone
I've done the first one and I enjoyed it. I remember something nagging me about it, but I can't remember what it was so it can't be that important. If I remember I'll stop by and say it.

Besides that you better keep up on it, if you leave me with a day and nothing to do, I might have to hunt you down and do bad things to you.

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 10:30 am
by allencum
very good tease, please continue...
i'm waiting for the next 2 episodes before I really start it ;-)

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 12:47 pm
by tBone
*waves fist angrily in air*

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:21 pm
by tBone
/hug

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:26 pm
by indica
It's very good so far, thanks! I hope the chastity belt isn't required during the 7 days though.

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:42 am
by indica
No problem, but just as a suggestion you could have had a punishment/alternative for those without one, instead of just assuming everyone got one.

The only other complaint I have is that threats like "or I'll kick you in the balls", etc, break my immersion. I understand you want it to be quite story based, but personally I find it harder to get into.

But really good job, looking forward to tomorrow's!

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 4:56 pm
by indica
Hmm I'm not sure where it was, I think I was mistaken. In any case, I just meant things like "I have a few rules for you slave in which you must stick to at all times otherwise ill send you to prison", "Ill take mine back so I can put them in the wash as I wouldn't dream of wearing them", things like that.

But again, no problem, thanks for getting day 5 up so quick.

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 2:18 am
by real-webjunky
oh my god - she looks so nice ... :love: :love: :love:

really like the story, but read through it in a view hours ;)

hm
- don't have a chastity device, so have to be strong
- didn't go to sleep and waited for the next day.
how could one be forced to wait a day?
- decided to swallow some precum and didn't shoot - as she would not (yet) allow me ...
- would eat anything she gives to me .... :w00t:

about the story
- good written (some words strange style of english don't matter so much)
- good choice of pictures
--> gives a lot of room for fantasy

will there be a week 2 and 3?

best regards

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Sat May 12, 2012 12:15 am
by sweetmusic
Great tease

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Sat May 19, 2012 7:35 pm
by slaveashish
Really well written.

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Thu May 24, 2012 2:59 pm
by TeasedPDB
Just did "a new chapter" without realizing there was a first week... You've done great work with this! I'll have to go back to the first week and then return. Keep it up!

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 12:21 am
by johnsand
i cannot find any of your teases past day 3... Any idea where i can find them?

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 9:01 pm
by plissk3n
Hi ruinedoh, just did the first part of this tease and wanted to follow it. But I have a question which I could easily answer myself by clicking through the teases but that would spoil the fun I guess.

Is there analplay in my coming week? And when not, am I allowed to do it with some other teases?

Cheers!

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 6:54 pm
by anonymous1403
I just finished the first week which was my first real tease on Milovana.. I did take part in a few other teases during the week and I actually repeated some of your "Building You Up" days a few times. Unfortunately I had to do it without the chastity device because they cost way more than I would like to pay for a sexual thrill :-|. I don't know if I want to continue the series just yet. Mainly because their are other teases I would like to do first. I am looking forward to continuing it though. A whole month without an orgasm would be twice as long as my record :lol:, so it would be a fun challenge.

The bad English was a bit distracting I'm afraid. I could go back and correct a lot of it for you if you were interested in reuploading it. I'm no expert English writer, but I am quite proficient with it. Overall I really enjoyed the first week.

Re: FB - Building you up

Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2012 7:49 pm
by jonatan40
this series caught my eye when it was original posted, but only now I came to really try it. So far I am only at day one and like it a lot and hope to follow it and all the commands to the end. I hope by posting this it would be harder for me to give up in the middle of the week.
j.