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Interactive Denial
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 5:27 am
by cerebus
Hi guys!
Totally new to the forum and to making webteases but I think I made a half way decent one inspired by the Asian experience. Please give me feedback as harsh as possible. It's the only way I'l learn.
Thanks in advance everybody!
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 2:13 pm
by dark
Wow awesome voting! Welcome have fun here
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 2:36 pm
by JelloBoy
Be careful spoiler!
Well, I tried the T&D part of the interavtive tease and was disappointed, I like the denial part of T&D, so being told to cum in my underwear was unusal. I skipped that instruction and finished the tease, giving you only 3 stars.
Don't get me wrong, I really like the whole concept of your tease, and will try the other parts out in the comming days, but I didn't think the T&D section lived up to it's name.
~Jello
edit by dark: added spoiler warning
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:57 pm
by whacker44
darn should have put a spoiler warning on that LOL
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 4:19 pm
by JelloBoy
whacker44 wrote:darn should have put a spoiler warning on that LOL
true, my bad
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 5:38 pm
by alpahde5
only beaf i have with it, is.. grammar but lets not open that can of worms otherwise great tease!
Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 6:21 pm
by nialli
I personally thought it was an excellent tease, I only did the "Humiliation" one but it had force feeding in it which was right up my street.
That, combined with the ending meant I spent an awful lot of time this afternoon trying to clean my house up
I may try some of the others when I've recovered and let you know what i think!