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Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:27 pm
by Atmon
I never got around to reading the text. I was too stoked on the pictures. I just sat there and watched. It was too good for sexy.
Just to commend Dellok on choice of a model who seemed to represent the beauty of a woman, a natural woman at her best.
That's all I have to say on that.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:36 pm
by Atmon
After having a rerun, I should clarify, I took the 'medium' option, and that is where the natural woman caused me to post this thanks note. Seems that the easy and hard alternatives are totally unrelated to thiis.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:33 pm
by supermokkori
Atmon wrote:After having a rerun, I should clarify, I took the 'medium' option, and that is where the natural woman caused me to post this thanks note.
Um, Atmon. Maybe you're talking about the "natural lighting" of the photos, but the model you're talking about in the 'medium' option Bryci... well, she's not natural at all. She's very enhanced in the breast area.

Hope I'm not busting your dream bubble.

Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 6:01 pm
by Atmon
supermokkori wrote:Hope I'm not busting your dream bubble.

Nah. What you see is what you get.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 11:52 pm
by Dellok
Well, i'm glad you liked the tease.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 9:57 pm
by Nezhul
I'v starred it 5, it's well made. But I'v gotta explain and criticize a few things. Spoiler for those who haven't played.
- Spoiler: show
- I'm not viewing myself as a sexual titan, so I picked medium setting first. Quite enjoyed it that day, however began to question if I actually was a sexual titan, at least by tease's standarts. It seemed too easy to me, but I thought "Hell, that happens". It was still good and funny.
So the next day I tried hard setting. It was very easy at the beginning, right before a choice is given. First day I'v decided to take her bet, just out of interest. Was quite looking forward to failing, and that said - I'v indeed been made to fail. But how?! I'v expected some really hard stuff, instead what we get is basically cheating making you cum anyway (edge and then stroke as fast as you can for 10 minutes?). That thing completely ruined the mood. Things I hate the most is buttons that lead to tease failure. That one is quite funny and quite realistic, but heck - ruins the mood.
Anyway, I'v given the tease a third go, and refused to take her bet. And you know what? I was indeed prooved to be sexual titan, because the hard setting seamed EASIER to me, than the medium one. A lot easier. Lots of long breaks, lots of medium-paced or even slow stroking. A few minutes of fast stroking spread between slow and rests. I'v actually had a hard time edging when asked to, because wasn't quite as horny for doing so. A few edges in a row in the end - but nothing special. The way it was promoted that should have been 15 excruciating minutes on the edge. But it was way too easy. And quite boring. had to go and watch some porn to finish the business.
pity.
Still, better than most.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:23 am
by Dellok
Hi, Nezhul, thanks for the feedback. I must confess I myself not really a "sexual titan" and belong in "normal". When i was writing the tease, I decided to put levels for a simple reason : I recieved some thanks for the "easy" mode of my tease Levels allowing "early comers" and other "really-not-sexual-titan" to do a tease to the end. So i decided to keep on doing so. But I then find myself with only two modes : Easy and Normal. Hard was then a good addition but the Hard was my conception of hard.
If you'd give me "exemples" of your conception of hard, it would help me for my futur teases.
Dellok.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 3:51 pm
by Nezhul
My criticism is meant as a constructive feedback, I still gave you 5 stars.
That's what I can say about hard not being really quite hard:
1) too much slow stroking or normal stroking. In my opinion there should be more fast stroking. BUT you shouldn't get too focused on that.
2) definitely needs more edging. The way I'd go with the hard setting, is make a player stroke quite good and fast for 5 minutes, then make him edge a few times (just like you did in the end). Then after a short rest make him stroke some more when he's already hard, and some more edging in the end. Maybe with holding
3) too plain. The medium part got nice palming experience. I think the hard one should have had that too. And other interesting techniques. Like stroking the head only or something. The hard one was simply stroking, stroking, stroking..... too plain, as I said
Don't be afraid of making a hard setting too hard. Even if 90% of guys can't really finish it - heck, they were warned!
Give in to your fantasy, imagine the best sexual torture you could think of. And that would be a hard one =)
p.s. Also, keep the tease consistent. If 1st two settings feature only pleasure, you shouldn't try adding CBT to the hard one.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:31 pm
by Dellok
Nezhul wrote: My criticism is meant as a constructive feedback
It's exactly how I took it, no worries.
You're right about the "plain" part, I didn't put any "head strokes" or "base strokes" etc... I'll put some in the next tease. (The next, next one, not in "Weaklings")
Nezhul wrote: CBT
Excuse my english but what is CBT ? Cock & Balls Tease ?
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 11:39 am
by Nezhul
torture, I believe. Generally it's about pain. I meant that if a tease is about pleasure there shouldn't be pain involved. Something like post-orgasm torture doesnt count. I just often see teases where everything goes good and nice and then you are suddenly asked to punch your balls hard. Such inconsistency turns me off.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:20 pm
by les
I think not getting what you want while it is in plain sight counts as torture.
So teasing can be torture without the pain, except the pangs of desire.
Many forms of "torture" are considered, by the masses, to be used for extracting information.
With pain most often the incentive to "Spill the Beans".
I suspect just the threat, to themselves or loved ones, of pain can be sufficient in many cases.