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First try

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:00 pm
by Oda
Well, i write for several years some short stories, but never in english and never in this genre. So i am pretty sure there are some mistakes in the text, but i want to share the story... and i would love some feedback, if you want to give me some. Thank you for that.

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There i was... all naked and tied on a bed. How could that happen? Forced to lay here on my bed, without any chance to get out of it. Should I be scared? Maybe, but I am not, I am excited and my heart feels like it could explode at anytime. But what happened exactly? I met this hot girl in the bar and it took her seconds to get into my mind and seduce me. All she needed for that was her amazing eyes... and this very special look in her face. I couldn´t resist her and somehow I doubt any man could resist her. The whole time in the bar my mind was just thinking about one thing, I wanted to kiss her, touch her and fuck her. And what shall I say? As her angelic voice told me to come with her, I couldn´t believe it. I was literally in heaven and to be honest... I still feel like in heaven.

So vulnerable... my arms and legs spread and tied to the corners of the bed. But I let her do that to me on my free will and again all it costs her was a simple smile. How long is she gone now? I can´t really tell, but the waiting excites me too and when I look down on me I can see that I am already hard. It´s embarrassing, but in the same time I enjoy it so much... a really strange feeling. Again I tried to free myself, but I already knew it wouldn´t change much on my situation. Besides, I don´t even know if I want to change the situation. I don´t know what will happen, but that is one point that is arousing me so much and then it happens... she walks trough the door and looks amazing. I was stunned for a moment as I checked her out. Her magnificent body... her long and sexy legs in her high heels. She wears black stockings and some very sexy silk lingerie... damn... and again this unique look in her face. She is simply amazing and her short black hair fits to her so perfectly.

“You look so fantastic...”

Finally I could speak again, but she puts her finger to her lips and shows me to be quit. I follow the order and don´t say anything. Slowly she walks towards me... and as she arrived the bed, she starts to crawl. She moves so amazing... just to watch her get close to me makes me even harder and she notices it.

“I see you´re enjoying it.”

Not sure if I am allowed to talk I just nod and there is it again. Her beautiful and seductive smile. If I could I would pounce on her and would take her right away... but I can´t and that is frustrating me. Again I try to free myself, but it is more a reflex than something I could control with my own mind.... and she enjoys it. I see it in her eyes. She likes to see me tied to the bed and all that excited. She likes her lips and gives me a short kiss on my neck. It felt like a electric shock...

“Fuck...”

Again the finger on her lips... she wants me to be quit and I try to be.

“Tonight I will play with you... like... I... want...”

I don´t know how to react on this. The way she said her and her wicked smiley scares me a little bit, but in the same way it makes me harder again! I didn´t even know that would be possible, but I can feel it. I can feel how my cock is throbbing. I want to touch her so bad! But still I am unable to do it! She begins to caressing my body... soft and gentle. It feels so good and still I can´t do anything!

“How do you like that?”

Her hands are wandering slowly down my body to my cock. She touches it... strokes it slowly... and I begin to moan. That feels incredible! Finally a little bit stimulating for me and she is so good at this.

“Ohh... seems you like it!”

Again her smile and I realize that I am moving my hips with her soft stroking. Again more a reflex, but I don´t stop it, it feels to good and I see that she likes it to play with me like that. But then she stops and begins to laugh... fuck... why did she do that?

“Not so fast my little Boy... the night is long.”

Damn... I was just really getting into this and she stopped. How cruel... but there is no time to be really angry at her. Why? Well, because she goes down on me and starts to lick my cock and that is even better than her hand. I can feel her soft tongue moving up and down my shaft and then... she begins to suck it. Not fast, not hard, but still it is so intense. I starting to move my hips again to get even more out of it and she lets me. She does that several minutes and I feel like I get closer and closer to cum and I know it won´t take much time anymore and I will cum so hard. It seems she knows that too and begins to suck harder. I start to breath very heavy and concentrate on cumming... closer... closer... closer...

“Enough of that!”

WHAT? How could she do that? Damn... I was so close... so closer! One more second I would have cum... so frustrating and she? She smiles at me.

“Why did you stop?”

She doesn´t answer. Just her wicked smile and I am still bound to the bed and at her will. She stands up and as she stands so over me and I am looking up to her, she removes her panties and gives me a fantastic look on her pussy. My cock is still throbbing and I wouldn´t do anything more than to fuck this pussy right now.

“Because it´s time for my pleasure... silly boy...”

She stands directly over my face and begins to move her pussy down right to my face... I can smell her... I can taste her... so good. It makes me so much more horny... if I could I would stroke my cock so hard, it would take me seconds to cum.

“Lick!”

I start licking her pussy and I love it. But even if I wouldn´t love it, I had to do it. No space to move my head. She trapped me with her legs and so I have to lick her, but I enjoy it. She tastes so good... and she likes it too. I can tell from her moaning and from her grinding.

“Faster!”

I do as she told me and lick her faster. She moves her hips faster too and I can hear how her moans get wilder and louder... fuck... she is so amazing. I can´t take my eyes from her stunning body as she rides my face. Her firm breasts and her beautiful face. I would love to look her into her eyes, but she closed them awhile ago. She is near an orgasm, I can feel it. The way she moves and moans... I lick faster...

“Yes... yes... YEEEEEEEEESSSSS...”

And she stops moving... breathing heavily after her orgasm.... still with her closed eyes and I stopped licking her too. Then her eyes slowly opens and she looks down to me...

“Clean it...”

I start to lick her again... hmm... she tastes so wonderful. I do it very gentle, and it seems that she likes it tht way. She smiles at me and that makes me feel good, but my cock is still so hard and throbbing. I can´t see it right now, but I feel it and I feel some precum leaking out of it.

“Enough.”

I stop immediately and she leaves my face. My face is covered with her juice and I can still taste it. So wonderful... but she has found a new target already... my cock!

“Look at that... seems someone is horny!”

Again she goes down on me and licks the precum away. I begin to moan, as her tongue touches my cock. She sucks it a little bit as she looks at me. Her look is a little bit scary, but I don´t care right now. I just want to cum and her warm, wet mouth feels so good at my cock. Again I get closer and closer to my orgasm... but again... right before I would cum... she stops and she begins to laugh at me.

“I think you had enough.”

WHAT? I can´t believe my ears! I am so horny and she thinks I had enough? She stands up and winks at me and then she leaves the room, with me still tied to the bed and a throbbing and leaking cock.

Re: First try

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 9:24 pm
by DoxysTurtle
First!

Well written Oda. Better than many things I've read, and surely it didn't help my frustration level.

Re: First try

Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:42 am
by Banquo
Oda, you've already had my thoughts on this stroy. But just wanted to say well done for posting it. It takes courage to put your writing out there for all to see.

Well done, and again...Great Story :-)

Re: First try

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:47 am
by Oda
How long has it been since I've become trapped in this situation? I don´t know... It might be just a few hours, but it feels like an eternity. I am still tied to the bed and haven´t had even the slightest chance to free myself. I am struggling... but not for the ropes, for the teasing! Every time I look down on my body, I can see her completely naked. She is teasing my cock with her hands, her tongue, her mouth and with her beautiful eyes... Just one look into their depths and she has me again.

How is she doing this? It feels so incredible good, but at the same time it is so frustrating. She never lets me cum, and I feel my mind slowly melting away. Every time I am on the brink of orgasm, she stops! So beautiful, but so cruel at the same time. Her face looks like an angel, but right now she acts like a devil. I try to avoid looking at her, but something always drags me back to it. I can´t handle it anymore... Every time I get near an orgasm, I think it will happen! I think it's impossible that she could prevent me from cumming, but I am always so wrong. She can... and she enjoys it! I know it. I feel it.

That feeling is crushing my mind. I need to get free! I try to break the ropes... as hard as I can. She sees me struggling and just smiles at me. She knows that I have no chance to free myself, so why should it really bother her? She just keeps teasing me... with her tongue on the sweet spot. Fuck... and again she stops. I could beg her to let me cum, but I know it would make no sense. I already tried that hours ago. She just put her finger on her lips to quiet me, and I've followed the command.

I can only ask myself... will she ever stop again? And right in this moment, she stops. I look to her with a questioning look on my face, and she just smiles at me again. She works up her way to my face very slowly... rubbing her body against mine. Of course, that isn't helping my frustration much, but I guess that is her plan. Her face is now directly above mine. I try to look away.... I try to avoid her eyes, but she doesn't allow it. Immediately she puts her hand on my face and turns it towards her own. I feel her warm breath on my skin and feel the urge to kiss her, but I am not dumb enough to do this. I just hold still and try not to get too horny. Then she begins to speak...

“You seem to be a little... turned on by me?”

Is that a joke? Of course I am! I don´t give her an answer on that, she is just toying with me... The smile on her face shows me that she knows how I am feeling about it. That is exactly what she wants, and I can´t do anything against it. She plays me like an instrument.

“Aww... I think...”

She takes her hand away from my face, caressing my body gently and working her hand down to my cock... Slowly she strokes it again. I am trying to stay calm, but I simply can´t. I am rock hard and breathing heavily.

“You want to cum... Am I right?”

I can´t stand it anymore... I truly cannot speak anymore. The words inside of my head make no sense at all, so I merely nod. She seems to be pleased with that result and asks me a question.

“What would you do... to earn a release?”

What I would do? I can´t believe my ears. Why should I earn it? She just needs to untie me and I will do that in seconds! But something in my head tells me that this isn´t so easy. Something says to me I should play along, and to be honest... that sounds like a good idea.

“I would do anything...”

Her eyes open a bit - not in shock, her face seems to be pleased. I think that was the answer she wanted to hear. She stops stroking my cock and gives me that look again. It arouses me so much, that I hate it right now. I am under her control. She can do to me whatever she wants to me, and she takes full advantage of that fact. She knows how I react to that look in her eyes... I love and hate her for that all at once. It´s incredible... and then she begins to smile! It's a wicked smile that begins to scare me... What could she do to me?

“Anything? How... interesting. What should I demand from you?”

She seems to think about it, but I doubt that's true. She is still just toying with me. She wants to tease me, but the truth is she already knows what she wants from me. I am a little bit afraid, because I have no clue what she could want.

“How about... some more teasing... some more denial... and some more... frustration? I think that would be a wonderful idea!”

A shiver goes trough my body as she says that. She is still not satisfied with my frustration? Oh my... How much does she want?

“Hmm... I don´t want to keep you in my bed any longer, I doubt that I can trust you! I bet you would cum directly after I untie you... So... how could we solve that problem?”

Untie me? That sounds heavenly!

“I won´t... I promise! Please untie me!”

Again that wicked smile from her. She bends down to me, near my ear as she whispers...

“Silly boy... you think I will believe your lies? I know that I can´t trust you and your hands...”

She straightens up her body and looks down at me again.

“Don´t worry... I have an idea how to solve this little problem of yours! But first we need to make you a little bit... softer.”

She looks at my hard cock for a moment. I don´t know what she means. Why should I be soft? She wants to tease me, but her wicked smile shows me again that she has a plan for me. I have a feeling I won´t like it that much. She stands up from the bed and leaves the room without saying a word. I am glad that she left, because that gives me a chance to recover. Her presence alone makes me so horny and needy. But as I feared, this break wasn´t to last for long. After a few minutes, she is back with a bowl. I can´t see what is in it. Again this look on her face... I avoid it by looking away from her.

“Awww... Why are you looking away from me? You don´t think I am pretty?”

She touches my hard cock again and strokes it.

“Hmm... or maybe too pretty?”

I won´t give her the satisfaction of an answer. Besides, she already knows it! In the time I am looking away from her, she places the bowl next to me and gets an ice cube from it. She puts it into her mouth before lowering her head to suck on my cock. It hits me like a flash... The cold ice cube in her mouth, her sucking...

“FUCK...”

The feeling is unlike anything I've ever known. The ice cube is so cold... I am trying to go away from it, but the ropes keep me in place. Her mouth still feels good. It is a strange mixture of pleasure and this unbearable feeling of the cold ice cubes. I think her intention is to make me soft, but with my cock in her mouth it seems to be impossible, despite the intense chill of the ice. If anything, it seems to be even harder! Suddenly she stops...

“You don´t want to get soft for me?”

I breath heavily, still trying to avoid to looking at her... Such a tease.

“I can´t...”

I take the risk and look at her. She is smiling at me, but not as wicked as before. This time the smile is really warm, and she looks like an angel again. Hard to believe she is the one while she is torturing me, but still... It's the truth.

“Awww... Am I too much for you? Maybe I should help you with that...”

She stands up again and walks next to me to get a cloth from the bedside. She wraps it around my head to blindfold me.

“I hope that will help you! Now back to your cock!”

No more sucking... She just holds some ice cubes against the tip of my cock. It is so sensitive, and this stimulation is way too much for me. I try to fight it, but I simply cannot. As the minutes goes by and the ice cubes melt down, I am finally soft. Even if I weren't tied up, I don't think I could move an inch. I am exhausted, and can only lie here. I barely notice her leave the rooms for a second time.

When she comes back, she begins working with something on my cock. I thought she would tease me again with something, but I was so wrong. I didn´t fight her... Damn... I couldn´t fight her, even when I wanted to!

I said to myself, "Just let her tease you. It can´t go on forever."

Suddenly I feel something pressing tightly all around my cock. What was that? Then I hear a click...

“That should solve our little problem.”

She removes my blindfold and I look directly between my legs.

“Wh-What is this?!”

She just laughs at me. The wicked smile is back, and it scares me more than ever.

“That, my little boy, is a chastity device... With it, I can trust you not to touch yourself when I don´t want you to.”

I heard about such things, but I couldn´t imagine being trapped in one someday. What shall I do now? I am speechless and can´t even begin to respond... While I am thinking about my bad situation, she begins to untie me. Why shouldn´t she? With this device on me, I can´t do anything to pleasure myself.

“I am in possession of the only key to your cage. So I would recommend that you do what I say.”

I just nod my head. What else can I do? She has the key.... My eyes follow her as she walks slowly to a chair. Of course, this arouses me again and I can feel how my cock wants to get hard, but it can´t. It hurts, causing me to whimper a little bit. She sits down with a smile...

“Come here, little boy... Why don´t you kiss my feet?”

Again I can´t believe my ears. She wants me to do what? I am in shock, and my look says everything. I won´t do that! She seems to know what I'm thinking. Is it bothering her? Not really... She has her methods of convincing people, and I know that already. She begins to smile and leans forward a little bit...

“If you don´t want to earn your release, then that's ok, but... I thought... you... would... do... anything...”

I am shocked again... I said that, but... Damn. I see that I am in a trap. She has me in her hand, and I can´t do anything about it. So I am going over to her. I am ashamed of myself, but I have no other choice. I kneel before her and begin to kiss her foot.

“Good boy. Do it slow and gentle... We´re in no rush, are we?”

In no rush? Maybe she isn´t in a rush, but I feel such a strong urge between my legs. I want to cum badly, but what can I do? I need to listen to her, so I do as she says. I start to slowly kiss the toes of her beautiful foot. I look into her eyes, but I can´t really tell if I am doing it right. Her face shows nearly no expression. So I try harder and begin to kiss her heel. After I kiss nearly every part of her foot, she speaks to me again.

“I want you to lick and suck it!”

I just nod my head and go back to work. I start to gently lick the sole of her foot. I work my tongue to the toes and begin to suck each of them. I think I see a small sign of enjoyment in her magnificent eyes. I continue to lick and kiss the back of her foot before I return to her toes. Right at the moment that I think I'm getting the hang of it, she pulls her foot away from me.

“You disappoint me... I expected much better from you. That is not enough pleasure to make me cum, and it´s certainly not enough pleasure to allow you to cum!”

She stands up from her chair and slowly walks towards the door. I feel really bad. Not just because I won´t get to cum, but because I disappointed her. Before she leaves the room, she looks back to me. No smile, nor the special look on her face I love so much. When that look was there before, I feared it because of the control she could get over me with it, but now... Now I miss it.

“You will stay in this room and wait for me!”

Again I just nod my head and watch how she exits the room, leaving me behind. I hope it won´t take too long...

Re: First try

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 2:04 pm
by DellaRoss
I gotta say i am even more impressed with part 2. Oda you are a very good writer and thus far you have proved to be an excellent story teller. keep going please!

Re: First try

Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 5:09 pm
by shell
*I stumble across this..................and sit here...wet, very wet.....my pussy aching to be touched......I moan softly and mouth one word...* WOW!

Re: First try

Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:50 am
by dr.d
I need to check the stories more often, this is excellent work Oda