First try
Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:00 pm
Well, i write for several years some short stories, but never in english and never in this genre. So i am pretty sure there are some mistakes in the text, but i want to share the story... and i would love some feedback, if you want to give me some. Thank you for that.
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There i was... all naked and tied on a bed. How could that happen? Forced to lay here on my bed, without any chance to get out of it. Should I be scared? Maybe, but I am not, I am excited and my heart feels like it could explode at anytime. But what happened exactly? I met this hot girl in the bar and it took her seconds to get into my mind and seduce me. All she needed for that was her amazing eyes... and this very special look in her face. I couldn´t resist her and somehow I doubt any man could resist her. The whole time in the bar my mind was just thinking about one thing, I wanted to kiss her, touch her and fuck her. And what shall I say? As her angelic voice told me to come with her, I couldn´t believe it. I was literally in heaven and to be honest... I still feel like in heaven.
So vulnerable... my arms and legs spread and tied to the corners of the bed. But I let her do that to me on my free will and again all it costs her was a simple smile. How long is she gone now? I can´t really tell, but the waiting excites me too and when I look down on me I can see that I am already hard. It´s embarrassing, but in the same time I enjoy it so much... a really strange feeling. Again I tried to free myself, but I already knew it wouldn´t change much on my situation. Besides, I don´t even know if I want to change the situation. I don´t know what will happen, but that is one point that is arousing me so much and then it happens... she walks trough the door and looks amazing. I was stunned for a moment as I checked her out. Her magnificent body... her long and sexy legs in her high heels. She wears black stockings and some very sexy silk lingerie... damn... and again this unique look in her face. She is simply amazing and her short black hair fits to her so perfectly.
“You look so fantastic...”
Finally I could speak again, but she puts her finger to her lips and shows me to be quit. I follow the order and don´t say anything. Slowly she walks towards me... and as she arrived the bed, she starts to crawl. She moves so amazing... just to watch her get close to me makes me even harder and she notices it.
“I see you´re enjoying it.”
Not sure if I am allowed to talk I just nod and there is it again. Her beautiful and seductive smile. If I could I would pounce on her and would take her right away... but I can´t and that is frustrating me. Again I try to free myself, but it is more a reflex than something I could control with my own mind.... and she enjoys it. I see it in her eyes. She likes to see me tied to the bed and all that excited. She likes her lips and gives me a short kiss on my neck. It felt like a electric shock...
“Fuck...”
Again the finger on her lips... she wants me to be quit and I try to be.
“Tonight I will play with you... like... I... want...”
I don´t know how to react on this. The way she said her and her wicked smiley scares me a little bit, but in the same way it makes me harder again! I didn´t even know that would be possible, but I can feel it. I can feel how my cock is throbbing. I want to touch her so bad! But still I am unable to do it! She begins to caressing my body... soft and gentle. It feels so good and still I can´t do anything!
“How do you like that?”
Her hands are wandering slowly down my body to my cock. She touches it... strokes it slowly... and I begin to moan. That feels incredible! Finally a little bit stimulating for me and she is so good at this.
“Ohh... seems you like it!”
Again her smile and I realize that I am moving my hips with her soft stroking. Again more a reflex, but I don´t stop it, it feels to good and I see that she likes it to play with me like that. But then she stops and begins to laugh... fuck... why did she do that?
“Not so fast my little Boy... the night is long.”
Damn... I was just really getting into this and she stopped. How cruel... but there is no time to be really angry at her. Why? Well, because she goes down on me and starts to lick my cock and that is even better than her hand. I can feel her soft tongue moving up and down my shaft and then... she begins to suck it. Not fast, not hard, but still it is so intense. I starting to move my hips again to get even more out of it and she lets me. She does that several minutes and I feel like I get closer and closer to cum and I know it won´t take much time anymore and I will cum so hard. It seems she knows that too and begins to suck harder. I start to breath very heavy and concentrate on cumming... closer... closer... closer...
“Enough of that!”
WHAT? How could she do that? Damn... I was so close... so closer! One more second I would have cum... so frustrating and she? She smiles at me.
“Why did you stop?”
She doesn´t answer. Just her wicked smile and I am still bound to the bed and at her will. She stands up and as she stands so over me and I am looking up to her, she removes her panties and gives me a fantastic look on her pussy. My cock is still throbbing and I wouldn´t do anything more than to fuck this pussy right now.
“Because it´s time for my pleasure... silly boy...”
She stands directly over my face and begins to move her pussy down right to my face... I can smell her... I can taste her... so good. It makes me so much more horny... if I could I would stroke my cock so hard, it would take me seconds to cum.
“Lick!”
I start licking her pussy and I love it. But even if I wouldn´t love it, I had to do it. No space to move my head. She trapped me with her legs and so I have to lick her, but I enjoy it. She tastes so good... and she likes it too. I can tell from her moaning and from her grinding.
“Faster!”
I do as she told me and lick her faster. She moves her hips faster too and I can hear how her moans get wilder and louder... fuck... she is so amazing. I can´t take my eyes from her stunning body as she rides my face. Her firm breasts and her beautiful face. I would love to look her into her eyes, but she closed them awhile ago. She is near an orgasm, I can feel it. The way she moves and moans... I lick faster...
“Yes... yes... YEEEEEEEEESSSSS...”
And she stops moving... breathing heavily after her orgasm.... still with her closed eyes and I stopped licking her too. Then her eyes slowly opens and she looks down to me...
“Clean it...”
I start to lick her again... hmm... she tastes so wonderful. I do it very gentle, and it seems that she likes it tht way. She smiles at me and that makes me feel good, but my cock is still so hard and throbbing. I can´t see it right now, but I feel it and I feel some precum leaking out of it.
“Enough.”
I stop immediately and she leaves my face. My face is covered with her juice and I can still taste it. So wonderful... but she has found a new target already... my cock!
“Look at that... seems someone is horny!”
Again she goes down on me and licks the precum away. I begin to moan, as her tongue touches my cock. She sucks it a little bit as she looks at me. Her look is a little bit scary, but I don´t care right now. I just want to cum and her warm, wet mouth feels so good at my cock. Again I get closer and closer to my orgasm... but again... right before I would cum... she stops and she begins to laugh at me.
“I think you had enough.”
WHAT? I can´t believe my ears! I am so horny and she thinks I had enough? She stands up and winks at me and then she leaves the room, with me still tied to the bed and a throbbing and leaking cock.
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There i was... all naked and tied on a bed. How could that happen? Forced to lay here on my bed, without any chance to get out of it. Should I be scared? Maybe, but I am not, I am excited and my heart feels like it could explode at anytime. But what happened exactly? I met this hot girl in the bar and it took her seconds to get into my mind and seduce me. All she needed for that was her amazing eyes... and this very special look in her face. I couldn´t resist her and somehow I doubt any man could resist her. The whole time in the bar my mind was just thinking about one thing, I wanted to kiss her, touch her and fuck her. And what shall I say? As her angelic voice told me to come with her, I couldn´t believe it. I was literally in heaven and to be honest... I still feel like in heaven.
So vulnerable... my arms and legs spread and tied to the corners of the bed. But I let her do that to me on my free will and again all it costs her was a simple smile. How long is she gone now? I can´t really tell, but the waiting excites me too and when I look down on me I can see that I am already hard. It´s embarrassing, but in the same time I enjoy it so much... a really strange feeling. Again I tried to free myself, but I already knew it wouldn´t change much on my situation. Besides, I don´t even know if I want to change the situation. I don´t know what will happen, but that is one point that is arousing me so much and then it happens... she walks trough the door and looks amazing. I was stunned for a moment as I checked her out. Her magnificent body... her long and sexy legs in her high heels. She wears black stockings and some very sexy silk lingerie... damn... and again this unique look in her face. She is simply amazing and her short black hair fits to her so perfectly.
“You look so fantastic...”
Finally I could speak again, but she puts her finger to her lips and shows me to be quit. I follow the order and don´t say anything. Slowly she walks towards me... and as she arrived the bed, she starts to crawl. She moves so amazing... just to watch her get close to me makes me even harder and she notices it.
“I see you´re enjoying it.”
Not sure if I am allowed to talk I just nod and there is it again. Her beautiful and seductive smile. If I could I would pounce on her and would take her right away... but I can´t and that is frustrating me. Again I try to free myself, but it is more a reflex than something I could control with my own mind.... and she enjoys it. I see it in her eyes. She likes to see me tied to the bed and all that excited. She likes her lips and gives me a short kiss on my neck. It felt like a electric shock...
“Fuck...”
Again the finger on her lips... she wants me to be quit and I try to be.
“Tonight I will play with you... like... I... want...”
I don´t know how to react on this. The way she said her and her wicked smiley scares me a little bit, but in the same way it makes me harder again! I didn´t even know that would be possible, but I can feel it. I can feel how my cock is throbbing. I want to touch her so bad! But still I am unable to do it! She begins to caressing my body... soft and gentle. It feels so good and still I can´t do anything!
“How do you like that?”
Her hands are wandering slowly down my body to my cock. She touches it... strokes it slowly... and I begin to moan. That feels incredible! Finally a little bit stimulating for me and she is so good at this.
“Ohh... seems you like it!”
Again her smile and I realize that I am moving my hips with her soft stroking. Again more a reflex, but I don´t stop it, it feels to good and I see that she likes it to play with me like that. But then she stops and begins to laugh... fuck... why did she do that?
“Not so fast my little Boy... the night is long.”
Damn... I was just really getting into this and she stopped. How cruel... but there is no time to be really angry at her. Why? Well, because she goes down on me and starts to lick my cock and that is even better than her hand. I can feel her soft tongue moving up and down my shaft and then... she begins to suck it. Not fast, not hard, but still it is so intense. I starting to move my hips again to get even more out of it and she lets me. She does that several minutes and I feel like I get closer and closer to cum and I know it won´t take much time anymore and I will cum so hard. It seems she knows that too and begins to suck harder. I start to breath very heavy and concentrate on cumming... closer... closer... closer...
“Enough of that!”
WHAT? How could she do that? Damn... I was so close... so closer! One more second I would have cum... so frustrating and she? She smiles at me.
“Why did you stop?”
She doesn´t answer. Just her wicked smile and I am still bound to the bed and at her will. She stands up and as she stands so over me and I am looking up to her, she removes her panties and gives me a fantastic look on her pussy. My cock is still throbbing and I wouldn´t do anything more than to fuck this pussy right now.
“Because it´s time for my pleasure... silly boy...”
She stands directly over my face and begins to move her pussy down right to my face... I can smell her... I can taste her... so good. It makes me so much more horny... if I could I would stroke my cock so hard, it would take me seconds to cum.
“Lick!”
I start licking her pussy and I love it. But even if I wouldn´t love it, I had to do it. No space to move my head. She trapped me with her legs and so I have to lick her, but I enjoy it. She tastes so good... and she likes it too. I can tell from her moaning and from her grinding.
“Faster!”
I do as she told me and lick her faster. She moves her hips faster too and I can hear how her moans get wilder and louder... fuck... she is so amazing. I can´t take my eyes from her stunning body as she rides my face. Her firm breasts and her beautiful face. I would love to look her into her eyes, but she closed them awhile ago. She is near an orgasm, I can feel it. The way she moves and moans... I lick faster...
“Yes... yes... YEEEEEEEEESSSSS...”
And she stops moving... breathing heavily after her orgasm.... still with her closed eyes and I stopped licking her too. Then her eyes slowly opens and she looks down to me...
“Clean it...”
I start to lick her again... hmm... she tastes so wonderful. I do it very gentle, and it seems that she likes it tht way. She smiles at me and that makes me feel good, but my cock is still so hard and throbbing. I can´t see it right now, but I feel it and I feel some precum leaking out of it.
“Enough.”
I stop immediately and she leaves my face. My face is covered with her juice and I can still taste it. So wonderful... but she has found a new target already... my cock!
“Look at that... seems someone is horny!”
Again she goes down on me and licks the precum away. I begin to moan, as her tongue touches my cock. She sucks it a little bit as she looks at me. Her look is a little bit scary, but I don´t care right now. I just want to cum and her warm, wet mouth feels so good at my cock. Again I get closer and closer to my orgasm... but again... right before I would cum... she stops and she begins to laugh at me.
“I think you had enough.”
WHAT? I can´t believe my ears! I am so horny and she thinks I had enough? She stands up and winks at me and then she leaves the room, with me still tied to the bed and a throbbing and leaking cock.