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My first work sexplaygame

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:59 am
by sombra11
Hello friends, I Inspired a lot in the videos as Hero and The Cock Stroker Ace Challenge, among others to make the game what I did.
It took 2 weeks and used to make videos of my taste and tried to keep the beats sound along with the scenes.
I hope you enjoy these works and I found here surpasses any of this forum is wonderful and I hope to be part of it forever.

This game are very hot,,, caution and take easy lol

Rules:

Follows the rhythm to ejaculate !

3 warns during the game:

1 Jack off slowly

2 wanks medium

3 jack off to cum yeah you bastard

You will not hold up to the end lol :wave:

just 272 MB
LINK: http://ifile.it/0rzgx1h

Re: My first work sexplaygame

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 2:39 pm
by bookworm
Sorry but this did not work for me. It is a compilation of cum shots. Quite stimulating in themselves, but not a tease.

Re: My first work sexplaygame

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 4:59 pm
by sombra11
I said , my firt work.

if you can give suggestions for better ok, but it is not a normal compilations
if you can show your work to see I thank you!

tanks
sombra11

Re: My first work sexplaygame

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 3:25 pm
by bookworm
sombra11 wrote:I said , my firt work.

if you can give suggestions for better ok, but it is not a normal compilations
if you can show your work to see I thank you!

tanks
sombra11
1. It should be longer.
2. There should be an audible beat.
3. There should be a variety of music.
4. There should be a variety of video clips. Just a collection of cum shots is not really a tease.

Just watch the various Cock Hero videos to see how it should be done. Or read the excellent advice here

http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=7615

I have no work of my own.

Re: My first work sexplaygame

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:19 pm
by sombra11
Thank you bookworm helped me a lot, so I'm going to improve this video I ever made!

appreciate the help and if you have any suggestions just let me know!