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This is my first tease contribution to my fave site on the web.

Feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Thanks
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I liked it generally. I won't give away any of the twists, but there were some fairly creative ideas.

One thing I don't like, though, is when a page tells you "Give me X strokes." That's a tad boring. I'd rather the tease weave the stroking in with the other events. Of if you are going to give me a number, divide it up between multiple pages. Even if they all use the same image, it will be better than just telling me to stroke several hundred times before continuing.

Yeah, thinking about it I don't think x number of strokes is very useful because it will affect different people differently...

Thanks for the feedback - I'll do a minor update.
G

wow this was awesome
LOVED it..very creative..could've gone on forever..

Spoiler: show

I have to confess I didn't do the end because I'm not into that..

but please keep it up..it was awesome

Thanks for the praise, Brian.

Judging by the rating, my first effort is being rather enjoyed!

I'm inspired to start the next devious tease...

Holy crud, this tease was not for the first timers. This was my first experience with Icy Hot and it hurt! I can't say the tease did not warn me, but damn. Great tease, keep it up, but it was too hot for me to handle. I think I will stick to nipple and ball torture.

But I will definitely use some of the tricks I learned in this tease.

I have to admit, that I kinda ignored the classic teases lately. But this definitely was a mistake. Great tease, I really enjoyed it! Especially all the nipple torture. Well done!

Nice first effort! Very nice!
In terms of feedback, I found the list of items necessary to be pretty long, and consequently hard to find all of them. (For instance, we only have 2 clothespins in the house that I could find, and to get more would have required a run to the store...). Also, I became a little confused about just what i was supposed to be doing at some points.
That said, I thought it was an excellent tease and I look forward to more like it from you. You have the knack!
Personally, I always like cock and ball bondage (well, any bondage...), cbt, written "admissions" are often fun too. I'm married and often think that it would be nice to have a couple of teases directed at married men, so keep that notion in mind if you do a few more of these!
Great work on this first tease!! It's really fun and exciting. Keep up the great work!

vor