FB: A firey introduction

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FB: A firey introduction

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This is my first tease contribution to my fave site on the web.

Feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Thanks
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I liked it generally. I won't give away any of the twists, but there were some fairly creative ideas.

One thing I don't like, though, is when a page tells you "Give me X strokes." That's a tad boring. I'd rather the tease weave the stroking in with the other events. Of if you are going to give me a number, divide it up between multiple pages. Even if they all use the same image, it will be better than just telling me to stroke several hundred times before continuing.
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Yeah, thinking about it I don't think x number of strokes is very useful because it will affect different people differently...

Thanks for the feedback - I'll do a minor update. :-)
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wow this was awesome
LOVED it..very creative..could've gone on forever..
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I have to confess I didn't do the end because I'm not into that..
but please keep it up..it was awesome
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Thanks for the praise, Brian.

Judging by the rating, my first effort is being rather enjoyed!

I'm inspired to start the next devious tease...
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Holy crud, this tease was not for the first timers. This was my first experience with Icy Hot and it hurt! I can't say the tease did not warn me, but damn. Great tease, keep it up, but it was too hot for me to handle. I think I will stick to nipple and ball torture.

But I will definitely use some of the tricks I learned in this tease.
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Post by dragoul »

I have to admit, that I kinda ignored the classic teases lately. But this definitely was a mistake. Great tease, I really enjoyed it! Especially all the nipple torture. Well done!
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Post by vor »

Nice first effort! Very nice!
In terms of feedback, I found the list of items necessary to be pretty long, and consequently hard to find all of them. (For instance, we only have 2 clothespins in the house that I could find, and to get more would have required a run to the store...). Also, I became a little confused about just what i was supposed to be doing at some points.
That said, I thought it was an excellent tease and I look forward to more like it from you. You have the knack!
Personally, I always like cock and ball bondage (well, any bondage...), cbt, written "admissions" are often fun too. I'm married and often think that it would be nice to have a couple of teases directed at married men, so keep that notion in mind if you do a few more of these!
Great work on this first tease!! It's really fun and exciting. Keep up the great work!

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