Milovana.com

I just put my first one out there. It doesn't have that much in the way of instructions in it. (I personally struggle with too many instructions-- ADHD)

I really liked the first couple of pics. If anyone else wants to write something with these pics, its okay with me.

I also wanted to acknowledge all those regular contributers that put in a lot of work to make cool experiences for the rest of us. (Experiences that I burn through in a few minutes) This was hard work, so my hats off to those that contribute regularly..

foolishjr.

Luv the tease being based in work office............only one little comment, you had her say to put her panties on, think that would be difficult with hand cuffed to ankle....otherwise kool ~s~

I really enjoyed it. Perhaps because of your 'ADHA' ness. It is also a very 'creative' scenario...



Thanks!!

I thought about the handcuff thing while I was writing but was too tired to fix it.

but hypothetically, if there's space between the cuff and the skin then I, er,..one could slip on some panties.. at least that's my theory.

Thanks for the feedback

foolishjr

jp wrote:That girl is incredibly hot! Who is she?

She is one of the models from onlytease.com I think her name is linda and there was a ton of stuff with her in it.


Foolishjr

foolishjr wrote:I just put my first one out there. It doesn't have that much in the way of instructions in it. (I personally struggle with too many instructions-- ADHD)

I really liked the first couple of pics. If anyone else wants to write something with these pics, its okay with me.

I also wanted to acknowledge all those regular contributers that put in a lot of work to make cool experiences for the rest of us. (Experiences that I burn through in a few minutes) This was hard work, so my hats off to those that contribute regularly..

foolishjr.

i suffer the same problem and appreciated this tease

This was a great first effort. The setting and style were definitely well chosen. I have to admit, though, I was rather disappointed at how disjointed this tease felt. Maybe I missed something, but it really felt like there were missing pages.

However, you definitely have a good style and picked some great photos. Keep up the good work.

-joeliwan

Thanks for the feedback.

The disjointed feeling may come from feeling rushed. My intention was to leave a suggestion or problem in the air from the model and in the next frame inform the reader how it was solved or what I imagined the victim must have done.