FB: For Couples
Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 7:12 pm
What a very interesting idea! There are several very good parts to this tease: the instruction ideas, the forced public humil, and the finish. Still, this tease needs a lot of work to be effective.
First, this seems to be a great candidate for a flash tease.
Second, you must edit the content...there are several mistakes that my g/f would just laugh at and ruin the mood
Third, it would be extremely important to have a list of items needed and a note that we will be headed outside before the tease begins.
Fourth, it seems that a tease like this needs to be more equally divided between "slut" & "bitch". Bitch doesn't have too much to do...I think slut won't want to participate if it's not more equal.
Finally, you may want to consider some photos that are more appealing to slut.
Of course, this is much better than I can do--and it is always easier to be a critic. Thanks for the hard work.
First, this seems to be a great candidate for a flash tease.
Second, you must edit the content...there are several mistakes that my g/f would just laugh at and ruin the mood
Third, it would be extremely important to have a list of items needed and a note that we will be headed outside before the tease begins.
Fourth, it seems that a tease like this needs to be more equally divided between "slut" & "bitch". Bitch doesn't have too much to do...I think slut won't want to participate if it's not more equal.
Finally, you may want to consider some photos that are more appealing to slut.
Of course, this is much better than I can do--and it is always easier to be a critic. Thanks for the hard work.