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Maybe it's bad form to start a feedback thread about your own tease, but I'm very curious what people think. I made a few small teases as practice, but this was my first major one. I worked really hard on it and tried to make it perfect, but judging from the rating there is still plenty of room for improvement.

So what did you like, what did you not like, what suggestions do you have to make better teases in the future?

Stair_Car wrote:I worked really hard on it and tried to make it perfect, but judging from the rating there is still plenty of room for improvement.

Well, it's got a 4.1 rating at the moment, so it's hardly like people don't like it.... I think you're being too hard on yourself here...
And I, for one, enjoyed it, and gave you a 5.0 on it.... Nice job!!

I liked the model, and god knows she's got enough picture galleries floating around where you'll have NO PROBLEM continuing the scenario...

I think the one thing I would have done is use less timers....
They weren't ~that~ bad in your tease, but generally when you get done reading the page, and then you just sit there 5-10-15-20 seconds, waiting for the page to change, it's just a bit annoying....
Timers are awesome in the right spot, but a lot of times they get used where there's really no point, and it just slows down the overall experience....

Otherwise, I liked it a lot.... Thanks again for your efforts...

Barry

Stair_Car wrote:Maybe it's bad form to start a feedback thread about your own tease, but I'm very curious what people think. I made a few small teases as practice, but this was my first major one. I worked really hard on it and tried to make it perfect, but judging from the rating there is still plenty of room for improvement.

So what did you like, what did you not like, what suggestions do you have to make better teases in the future?

Cucked By Sarah tease link


I think all authors should start a thread to their teases.
Including a link to the tease, as well as a mention/link in the tease to the thread.
Perhaps this will stop the multiple threads that sometimes appear when viewers are left to their own devices.

I'll provide a link to the forum in the tease.

I didn't mean to say the tease was bad, I just meant that anything that isn't perfect can be improved. I was taking my cues from 1885 with the timers. If you're stroking, or there's lots of text, the timer probably isn't a problem, but on some pages it does drag on a bit too long. I'll rethink it for next time.

I'm not really in to cucking but I still like it, and Peachez is one of my more liked models out there, the only complaint I had about it was being asked to edge so soon, or maybe it wasn't, maybe I just wasn't in the right state, but I was on that first edging screen for a long time, I like it when it has enough of a tease and buildup that when a tease gets to the first edge, I am ready to do so, good tease though and I hope to see more from you, maybe even a continuation. Thanks for creating!

5 stars for me. Good work !

The story is very well built and really enjoyable. I also like the multiple choices.

2 regrets :
- some pages have timers a bit too fast to read everything (a few more seconds would be great for people like me, whose 1st language isnt English)
- the end of the tease could have been more developped. Maybe in a second part ??? (i hope so...)

Thanks.

Definitely one of the best teases on this site in a good while.
I liked the writing style, the pics, loved the multiple choices. It was exciting, and it has a certain something that is missing from most of the other recent teases.
I really look forward for a second episode!!!

(Agree with about the timers thing, sometimes they are fine but others I just wished there was a continue button).

Great tease, loved the setting and the storyline, the timers were fine for me.
One thing I disliked was the sudden change of character POV at the end (not wanting to give spoilers too much)
I felt that it ruined the fantasy a little bit to be able to switch characters right at the end

Loved this tease. I have a huge cuckold fetish and this was awesome. Really enjoyed the choices and the direction it was going,

Spoiler: show

only thing I didn't like was the change at the end and then cumming. I'd have much preferred to be forced to watch and denied, I feel it would have fitted with the rest of the story. But I know people want to cum and so giving them that was good. You could have possibly had a choice of which POV you wanted at the end, the bull or the cuck. The bull gets to cum like you did whilst the cuck watches and gets denied. Just a random thought

But yeah I really enjoyed it, I hope you make more. Be nice to see a continuation of this or more with a similar theme.
Thanks again, 5 stars!!!

Thanks for the great feedback. I'll definitely take it into consideration for my next tease. The reason I probably won't make another Cucked By Sarah (which is also the reason for the final scene being the way it was) is because as awesome as Sarah Peachez is, she was an awful choice for a webtease on cuckolding because she has very few hardcore material out there, and most of it is POV blowjobs which obviously don't work well from a cuckolding point of view. But who knows, maybe I'll find some use for her glorious bum and devilish smile again in the future. Thanks for reading!

As far as I'm concerned I'm perfectly fine with the pictures of her alone: she fits the part very well (you're right, she has a devilish smile!) and I don't feel the need for hardcore material at all. Imagination is sexy

Yeah, but I was really hoping for the finale I could show her fucking a guy while you're forced to watch. But oh well. I guess imagination will have to do!

Excellent excellent excellent!!

I love cuck teases and the way this ended was great. Sort of like they were flicking polaroids of the action at me my while laughing (at least, that what I was imagining). SO good. Please do more!

Alright, I'm thinking about making a sequel that will expand the story a bit more. But in terms of kink I'd be grateful if you all would tell me what you think about various things.

First off, CBT. Real hardcore ballbusting stuff. The kind that would require a safety disclaimer up front. I know some people aren't into that, and I'd hate for them to not be able to enjoy cuckolding just because they're not into pain. So what do you think about CBT, and pain generally? Should I put it in and give the reader a chance to opt out, or what?

Second, what is it about cuckolding that people enjoy the most? I know some people like to make it a "race humiliation" thing, which I can't stand. But then I like a woman to humiliate a cuckold for having a small dick, and some people aren't into that. So what kinds of things make cuckolding alluring to you?

Not that much into pain. A little is fine. By the way, instructions like "smack your balls 30 times" and similar are a total turn-off for me. I want to read a story, not a manual.

I, too, can't stand "race humiliation".

I guess a good part of the excitement is the teasing. The way she plays with you and messes you up. The alternation between being sexy and being dominant. I liked the multiple choices idea.

I would not center a whole tease around the "small penis" thing. It can be cool here and there but otherwise it gets boring fast.

My 2 cents