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Since jryan said he wanted feedback, I decided to make a feedback thread for him. My feedback for jryan is to stop making teases and flooding the front-page with nonsense.

Does anyone disagree with me?

Disagree. His teases are so bad, they're funny. We always get a laugh from them in chat.


Eat ur toe jams!

Alliteration wrote:Disagree. His teases are so bad, they're funny. We always get a laugh from them in chat.


Eat ur toe jams!

Touche.

I think he should continue. They´re the best teases, but i don´t think that is a reason to say he should stop that. I don´t think the amount of teases is a point either.

I did not vote, because I do not believe THIS is the kind of feedback Jryan wanted! I have said before that I think his teases could be better, but then, realizing my wording may have been too harsh I deleted my comment.
This thread actually disgust me somewhat. I've always thought that we were an accepting community, but maybe I was mistaken. Jryan's teases aren't the best teases on this site, but I think his quality of writing is improving. Take a look at his first few teases and compare it to his more recent ones, I hope you'll see what I mean.
Not too long ago there was an argument that this site didn't get enough new teases and now you have decided to criticize someone who submits several teases at a time?
My advice to Jryan is to keep writing his teases, because each tease seems to gradually get better.
quaz.

I don't actually like any of them but I say continue too. Practice makes perfect I guess!

These teases and many others could probably be improved quite a bit if the creators weren't afraid to ask the community for help, proofreading and testing their teases before they made them public.

Okay, I finally had to take a look to see what all the hub-bub was about.....

Can't say they're the BEST teases I've ever read, but I had to chuckle in a spot or two, so certainly THAT'S worth something...
But I've seen a few worse.....

And while these really aren't MY cup of tea, for my vote, FWIW, I think they should stay....

To be fair let's compare jryan's teases and tbone's teases.

Oh wait... nm tbone doesn't have any teases.

While jryan's teases might not get the highest rating, he/she is at least trying and has contributed something. So perhaps you should grace us with some of your teases first and then we can take a poll to see whether yours should stay or not?

/bitch

xoxo

MissLusciousLisa wrote:To be fair let's compare jryan's teases and tbone's teases.

Oh wait... nm tbone doesn't have any teases.

While jryan's teases might not get the highest rating, he/she is at least trying and has contributed something. So perhaps you should grace us with some of your teases first and then we can take a poll to see whether yours should stay or not?

/bitch

xoxo

I've never composed any music. Does that mean I'm not allowed to say "this song is good, and that song is bad"? No, of course not.

quazwierdcev225 wrote:I did not vote, because I do not believe THIS is the kind of feedback Jryan wanted! I have said before that I think his teases could be better, but then, realizing my wording may have been too harsh I deleted my comment.
This thread actually disgust me somewhat. I've always thought that we were an accepting community, but maybe I was mistaken. Jryan's teases aren't the best teases on this site, but I think his quality of writing is improving. Take a look at his first few teases and compare it to his more recent ones, I hope you'll see what I mean.
Not too long ago there was an argument that this site didn't get enough new teases and now you have decided to criticize someone who submits several teases at a time?
My advice to Jryan is to keep writing his teases, because each tease seems to gradually get better.
quaz.

I might feel the same way...except, I disagree that they're getting better. Here's one of his more recent teases, sex world 4: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=13951

It's only one page, it's a huge wall of text, and the spelling/grammar is atrocious. If anything, this is worse than his first few teases, not better. I'd say, he's not making any effort at all.

les wrote:
I am thinking of having my serfs follow Jryan teases as a punishment.

With a failure to cum resulting in extended denial while watching the the cock hero series.
chuckles.

I can almost smell the fear.

"help, help, I'm being repressed!" -the serfs

MissLusciousLisa wrote:To be fair let's compare jryan's teases and tbone's teases.

Oh wait... nm tbone doesn't have any teases.

While jryan's teases might not get the highest rating, he/she is at least trying and has contributed something. So perhaps you should grace us with some of your teases first and then we can take a poll to see whether yours should stay or not?
/bitch
xoxo

Agreed....

And BTW, Lisa, enjoyed your teases in the past, and hope you'll give it another go writing more soon.....

Regardless, have fun!!

Thanks,
Barry

Alliteration wrote:

MissLusciousLisa wrote:To be fair let's compare jryan's teases and tbone's teases.

Oh wait... nm tbone doesn't have any teases.

While jryan's teases might not get the highest rating, he/she is at least trying and has contributed something. So perhaps you should grace us with some of your teases first and then we can take a poll to see whether yours should stay or not?

/bitch

xoxo

I've never composed any music. Does that mean I'm not allowed to say "this song is good, and that song is bad"? No, of course not.

You clearly missed my point. Does that stop you from writing utter nonsense? No ofc not.

MissLusciousLisa wrote:

Alliteration wrote:

MissLusciousLisa wrote:To be fair let's compare jryan's teases and tbone's teases.

Oh wait... nm tbone doesn't have any teases.

While jryan's teases might not get the highest rating, he/she is at least trying and has contributed something. So perhaps you should grace us with some of your teases first and then we can take a poll to see whether yours should stay or not?

/bitch

xoxo

I've never composed any music. Does that mean I'm not allowed to say "this song is good, and that song is bad"? No, of course not.

You clearly missed my point. Does that stop you from writing utter nonsense? No ofc not.

I've clearly missed your point too!