Milovana.com

So first of all I want to give Credits to the Ones starting this like Lalaland, AndyP or Vindicare, but also of course to everyone else who has done videos of this kind.

I am quite new to Milovana and well I found this Page because of the Cock Hero series. So after watching this video, I thought about making One myself. So I started working and well right now I know the basics to create a Video but well I'll have a long way to go. To improve my Work I've uploaded the first 4 rounds of my Attempt to get a Feedback. I hope that I'll be able to improve things that could be mentioned here or probably even completely change some things.

So about my Video of course I've taken the main parts of the Series, but I also wanted to change some things. First I wanted to create less things to distract from the girl, so I'll be trying to add sounds spoken by women from other Videos to encourage the viewer, so that I'll completely drop the pink text. I've already done round 3 & 4 this way, but in this preview I skipped that part, because I don't want to mess the Experience for the final Version, before it is done. Another Part is that I am not able to do the Strokemeter (even so there is a good Guide), I'll be working on that, but as long as I can't do that, I am just using quite simple rhythms so you should be able to get along. I also used the beat Sound to make them very clear, so there shouldn't be a great Problem.


So it is a Preview and in an early Phase so there are some Problems I know about myself and I am already working on them and have fixed them already, but they are still in the Video I uploaded.
These Things are:
1. Some of the written text didn't really fit the Screen or box they were in
2. In Round 3 there is missing an Announcement for 2 Breaks
3. The readme is missing, I will change the rules to match the Video, but I haven't done that yet

So here are the links to both Parts:

http://ifile.it/kqy69mr
http://ifile.it/ienby41

There is no password

So I'd be happy about Feedback so that my Final Version can be as good as I am possible to do, after all this is my first Video.

Nice1 pal,

Will take a look tonight :)

Andyp

Dont mind if I do. Thank you

Very Promising pal!!..

If you need help with the meter let me know!

One thing, if you going to cut the video (chance scene etc), make sure you do it in time with the beat. Watch this youtube clip it’s a really good vid that shows some beat tricks I didn’t know before I started CH….
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1kLKyD7Q8PI

And please put the meter in :) and create your self a tag for the top corner etc....

Regards

Andyp

Can't extract th archive. tried 7Zip and WinRar
(I can extract the 001 and 002 files. but i cant extract the archive inside).

-_sky_- wrote:Can't extract th archive. tried 7Zip and WinRar
(I can extract the 001 and 002 files. but i cant extract the archive inside).

you have to add the 001 and 002 files first. Use something like hjsplit.

Hey AnyOneElse,

Firstly, nice work so far on your very first tease compilation video. You've chosen a pretty hot mix of girls, so you've got a good eye for lovely ladies.

The song choices were pretty decent as well and the stroke beat was pretty clearly heard for the most part. So overall, a very good first attempt.

Now, on to the critiques:

1) Outline your text in black - it's actually only a problem in the 1st round, where the yellow text on top of the relatively light background makes it a bit hard to read. Plus, I think it makes the letters in your text a little more neater and pleasing to the eye when it's outlined in black (or dark gray or blue... your choice).

2) Cleaner cuts - andyp hinted to this already; try to make your scene changes and edits to match the rhythm of the beat. You don't need to go crazy with tons of rhythm cuts or necessarily need to make a cut if/when the rhythm changes. but the overall video transitions would be smoother if you make your edits/cuts/scene changes to the rhythm of the song.

3) Michael Buffer is once enough, good enough - Michael Buffer is cool the first time around; I don't think you need to keep using the "Let's Get Ready to Ruuuummbbbbbbllle!" sound clip for every single round.

4) Just a question more than a critique -are you calling it "Cock Hero - Endurance" because the sessions are supposed to be longer than previous Cock Hero series? Cuz so far, they're about average or just a little longer... no biggie, just asking because some people may wonder as well.

Overall, a nice star AnyOneElse, looking forward to seeing the finished product. :

So first of all thanks for the Feedback. To be honest there are some points where I just thought why didn't I see that myself, like the rumble sound before every Round (you know why you shouldn't copy and paste everything )

So right now I am cutting the videos again, because I think you're right, there are several parts where music and video absolutely not matching. With the Strokemeter I am also working on that and I think I will have it in the final Version. I wasn't able to watch the Video till now, but I will do later this day with a proxy. I also added the Tag on the Top Right.

The next thing is the color, I already changed that, especially in the first Round it really is quite difficult to read. Well why did I call it like that, to me it is more a working Title than anything else, I will probably come up with a completely different Name when I am done with the hole thing. But I named it like that, because the Rounds reminded me on the endurance rounds of other cock hero Movies. But like I said the final Name of it will be different, that's the same for the Rounds.

Also I am changing a few Things in the concept right now, like putting a Picture of the Girl next up between the Rounds and let her greet the Viewer in the Break.