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I dont know why this has got such a low rating, I think its pretty well written. Nice to see a new author actually writing a proper tease for once.
Its a bit short, and I would suggest using bigger pictures, or at least keeping all the pics the same size (that model is hot though, I would like to see more of her in teases )

Hoop234 I hope you're not discouraged by low votes, please write some more teases

It's really short and the pictures are all different sizes.
Kind of makes it distracting to follow along, even for the short amount of time.

I sometimes think that newbies accidently upload thumbnails instead of the pictures that the thumbnails link to. My advice is to download all the pictures first to make sure you got the full size ones. Then make the tease from those, e.g., using Word. Finally, after it's been proofread, upload it to milovana, using the the full size pictures.