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Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 10:44 am
by Kalivan
Just a quick shout to cumhardy on his latest tease.
Personally, I really appreciate teases of this nature. When there are no direct instructions, the writing style is much more critical - you did a great job!
My one (petty) critique would be the use of asterisks as a 'break'. It works fine, but looks slightly jarring.
Anyway, nice one!
Re: Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 4:09 pm
by cumhardy
thanks for the feedback!
what you say about the asterisk breaks, what would look better? It was supposed to indicate a short pause.
Re: Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 4:32 pm
by les
cumhardy wrote:thanks for the feedback!
what you say about the asterisk breaks, what would look better? It was supposed to indicate a short pause.
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Re: Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 4:40 pm
by cumhardy
les wrote:cumhardy wrote:thanks for the feedback!
what you say about the asterisk breaks, what would look better? It was supposed to indicate a short pause.
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Yeah actually that works better, Ill change it tonight when Ive got time.... also, that was your 3000th post! Congrats
Re: Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 5:22 pm
by Kalivan
Yeah, like I said. Not much of an issue at all, the main thing is the content, obviously!
I agree with Les, though