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Fantastic models. Really good dialogue, too. A wonderful webtease. Thank you.

doink wrote:Fantastic models. Really good dialogue, too. A wonderful webtease. Thank you.

Agree. Fantastic.

too sad that too much storytelling is simply not for me....

The somewhat disappointing thing about this tease is that while the dialogue is going somewhere sinister, that the picture of the model is always smiling in an angelic way... seems more sultry would be better.

Very enjoyable tease. I liked the dialogue.

I just want to say this is the best ruin tease i have had since "heidi ruins you".

I really hope the author continues the series as i enjoyed it greatly.

jayjaysub wrote:The somewhat disappointing thing about this tease is that while the dialogue is going somewhere sinister, that the picture of the model is always smiling in an angelic way... seems more sultry would be better.

For me the smiling makes a more wicked picture of the woman.

I loved this tease! The dialogue was great, the premise was great. The idea of permanent damage to one's cock is pretty hot, but of course it's usually kind of goofy to do in a tease because hopefully nobody's actually going to hack at themselves with a carving knife. This was a great way to explore that fantasy in a tease.

And someone mentioned that it was a bit wordy. I find most of 1885's teases too wordy, but this one didn't seem that way at all. It was actually quite brisk, with the story not distracting from the sex appeal at all.

Can't wait for part 2!

loved this tease!
cant wait for next

I am slightly bothered by the fact that, at no time at all, I can tell this chick to shut up and buy some damn window treatments. Curtains, blinds, whatever. You don't want people looking into your home while you're dancing around in your lingerie? Buy some curtains.

And how does she know that I am the only one? Perhaps she's been so obsessed plotting her revenge that she doesn't realize the my neighbors above, below and to the sides have been recording her and putting her on the internet.

Oh yeah, good tease though.

Makarov wrote:You don't want people looking into your home while you're dancing around in your lingerie? Buy some curtains

She's not talking about being watched from inside her house, she's talking about being watched as she goes between her car and the front door.

She goes out in public and expects no one to perv on her? Crazy ladies! Although I've noticed that crazy, revenge driven women are a theme for your teases.

Makarov wrote:Although I've noticed that crazy, revenge driven women are a theme for your teases.

What can I say? Being made vulnerable to mentally deranged women is a niche that desperately needed filling.

is part 4 happening? or have you stopped this series?

i hope not :(