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The Ex
Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 2:49 pm
by whacker44
i think that maybe this is my favorite tease of all time, and there is not ver a single nipple tweak !! Thank You for the aching nuts
Re: The Ex
Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 10:30 pm
by jayjaysub
I'm through part 1 and it's amazing so far... perfect timing.
I'm just wondering if I should deny myself a few days before starting part 2... any comments from the author on this? or anyone else?
Re: The Ex
Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 4:54 am
by 1885
whacker44 wrote:i think that maybe this is my favorite tease of all time, and there is not ver a single nipple tweak !! Thank You for the aching nuts
You're most welcome for the aching nuts, thank you for the compliment.
jayjaysub wrote:I'm just wondering if I should deny myself a few days before starting part 2... any comments from the author on this? or anyone else?
The entire tease takes place over a single weekend. I really just wanted to leave the passage of time up to the viewer's imagination instead of having them to wait it out in real time. If you did want to approach it that way, it's two days long in all and the time would break down like this:
3-4 hours between parts 1 and 2
5-6 hours between parts 2 and 3
Part 4 would start the next morning
3-4 hours between parts 4 and 5
5-6 hours between parts 5 and 6
Re: The Ex
Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 9:14 am
by Evals
It's quite uncommon nowadays to see teases where personality has been put into a character beyond one of two dominant girl archetypes. Usually the voice giving instructions in teases are either complete sadistic bitches or playful teases that are unrealistically giggly. The "ex" actually has a motive, and it's believable, at least to me.
The dialogue and timing between pages seemed very natural, too! Good tease!
Re: The Ex
Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 4:05 pm
by denialslave2010
yeah the greatest tease thats ever been done. By far my most fav tease, the wording was perfect. made believe i was there and thats how she felt. loved it thank you to the author
Re: The Ex
Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 1:12 pm
by 666
Amazing tease, truly a work of genius!!!!!!!
Re: The Ex
Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2011 3:36 am
by peedro
This was truly fantastic tease. I did all parts in a row and it got me out of this world.
- Spoiler: show
- The part where she denies your ruined orgasm was genius!
My balls sure are aching right now, thanks to 1885
edit: I must say the ending could have been LOT more intense.