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Hi I wrote gaping lessons, please can you tell me how to improve on my webtease skills, ive never written one before thanks :) Oh and yes, my ass does gape, im not a hypocrite! xx

I appreciate a new idea!
I don't think anyone has done a tease like this before!
so congratulations! on creativity
feel free to write more.

The only thing I wonder about
is the altered pictures.. no one can fit a ball inside themselves that big.. (I hope)
Other than that it was fairly well written,
although I have found new ideas do not tend to get super high ratings
I feel they are what contributes the most!

I also enjoyed the tease.
For a first tease it's a great start<;~)
It could have used some pictures/videos in the beginning to get me going.
maybe a dildo/ butt plug part to it.
Thanks
Message me if you want any help coming up with ideas

Thanks for the feedback, I was sceptical about the football photo! But i thought if it is real, then it is pretty damn impressive aswell as kind of bad for you!
I cant believe overnight my tease got 2000 views already!
Also i guess i just need to perfect my style then and get people going from the beginning, but i wrote the tease for people who dont have any sex toys, so that everyone could take part, although i will probably add the use of toys in the future!
Thankyou everybody! xx