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FB: Earn it with Rosie

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 6:27 pm
by brian
Hey everyone,

That's my second tease.
I'd appreciate some feedback :)

How did you like it?

Re: FB: Earn it with Rosie

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 6:40 am
by dolphkuellar
Hi,

I think you did a really good job with this. It's well-written, and I like the tone - encouraging, as though we're exploring something together. It's a good motivation to make it all the way through. As an added plus, you've got a nice variety of "activities" throughout, so it doesn't ever get stale.

So if you can't guess by now, I enjoyed this a lot :) Great work, and I hope to see more from you!

Re: FB: Earn it with Rosie

Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 6:44 pm
by brian
thanks

anymore feedback please?