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im just looking for feedback from my last tease. i havent had any response from anyone and theres been quite a few views so just get back to me if anyone's interested.

What feedback you looking at ?

This is not a webtease but personal ad in form of webtease.

Also I'am not suprised that nobody reply for something like that.

For few months it will be hard to find "normal" tease in all that spam.

Yeah, I'm not suprised you didn't get any responses. For a start, you used the webtease format to create an advert, with no tease aspects whatsoever, and a lot of people are getting annoyed by such webteases (hence the low rating).
Plus its lazy, you used bad grammar (like not capitalising the words at the start of a sentence). I know that sounds petty, but if you are really trying to 'sell' yourself, try to put some effort into it.

Also sentences like:
" i feel being controlled by a female is much better."
"i prefer not to send pics or videos of myself just to let anyone who interested know about this fact."

Make me instantly think you are a man trying to trick a girl into domming you, because the usual 'guy looking for a Domme' approach didn't work.
Whether this is the case or not, its the conclusion I drew and Im guessing a few other people would have thought the same thing.

cumhardy wrote:Yeah, I'm not suprised you didn't get any responses. For a start, you used the webtease format to create an advert, with no tease aspects whatsoever, and a lot of people are getting annoyed by such webteases (hence the low rating).
Plus its lazy, you used bad grammar (like not capitalising the words at the start of a sentence). I know that sounds petty, but if you are really trying to 'sell' yourself, try to put some effort into it.

Also sentences like:
" i feel being controlled by a female is much better."
"i prefer not to send pics or videos of myself just to let anyone who interested know about this fact."

Make me instantly think you are a man trying to trick a girl into domming you, because the usual 'guy looking for a Domme' approach didn't work.
Whether this is the case or not, its the conclusion I drew and Im guessing a few other people would have thought the same thing.

This (x10)

Mistressemme
I believe we both Know Les.

First the tease has only One picture, repeated again and again.
Second there are only a few females on this site so I am not sure how well your "advertisement" tease
will be read by them.
Third your tease contains no instructions, directions, or even suggestions
4th it tells subbies little to nothing about you...
what are you looking for?


And Lastly, I BEG you to please
either edit the teases to include something
interesting... like "Rub here.."
Or "Imagine this"
and more pictures or just simply delete all 3 of your teases so there are fewer advertisement teases
I would be happy to write a promotional tease,for you
(if you tell me what you want in a subby)
Or help you write a better tease.

I do appreciate you asking.
there is a whole thread called :the dummies guide to webteases"
http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=44
some of the stuff is helpful, some isn't but it may give you ideas.

However the BEST rule of thumb I recommend is "Is it something I would do?"
question, write and ask that question as you write.

ok i get the point. in each of my teases i have been looking for slave/sluts/switches and it is advertising my services as a mistress and everything else i do.
the only reason i made them was to get noticed and to get some new slaves and now maybe dommes/switches. i would have put them in the 'im looking for a domme/dom or sub' thread but it would not have got noticed as well as a tease.
the reason ive used the same pics for each tease is to give the idea of the same person in each tease advertising the service. and the reason i have done three of these 'advertising' teases is to try and get new people aware of me.
i am aware that there is only a limited number of female viewers of these teases but i was trying to do one specifically for any women who would be interested in trying this since the majority of people who responded to my previous teases were male.
i hope that if there are any female tease viewers reading this will take a look at my last tease and contact me, if not i still hope i might get some new male participants for the service i provide.
and lastly i only asked for feedback on why i hadnt got any responses, i understand now so i hope this will be the end of the matter.

You would be very notices if you'd come up with a good REAL tease, and add your promotion in it. Maybe even at the first page - who cares. Just make it interesting - I BET you'd get much better response to your mail. Just do a tease like a sample session of what you do. And then post your advertisement in any form you like and I'm sure it won't insult anyone and it will get more people interested.

oh and just to let you know i have now got two responses from women so maybe it wasnt that bad for everyone.