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Nikki's Struggle (Parts 4-8)
Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:34 pm
by Salamando
And the story continues with a nice instructional course on Powers and an interesting proposition for Nikki.
Parts 4 and 5:
http://sexmagesandotherstrangeness.blog ... s-4-5.html
Parts 6, 7, and 8:
http://sexmagesandotherstrangeness.blog ... s-6-8.html
Re: Nikki's Struggle (Parts 4-8)
Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 6:13 am
by SexualChoc
I reread the initial edited chapters
and these works,.
the earlier chapters posted are much smoother in flow and fits better logically with the rest of the story.
I truly enjoyed your work
I always look forward to more.
Just a suggestion, I don't know about you
but even adult sibling like to 'prank' each other..
I was thinking if the sister did some tiny thing to mess with her brother
like make his big toe a sexual spot... or something silly.
I mean there is being okay with it, and there is
oh hell if I just tweek that... a tiny bit, that would be funny as hell.
once again... just a suggestion.