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this is a great tease.i hope to see a part 2.it should definetly be a nominee for totm.it gets my vote.

Scooby, I appreciate your effort to give the author some feedback, but let's do this in the Art of Webteasing Forum

Thanks Scoob,

I’ve got a couple PMs and comments about a sequel. I’m kind of piecing one together now.

I wouldn’t mind hearing from you guys what elements you liked about that tease specifically. It would help me make the sequel if I knew what you want to see more of or maybe what didn‘t resolve in the first one that makes you want this story to continue.

Maybe one page you liked the most or one element of the story that you enjoyed the most so I know the kinds of things to keep in.

If I was just writing to you Scooby I’d have the girl rip off her mask at the end and be Old Man Jenkins. He would've gotten away with it too, if it wasn't for those meddling kids and their masturbating dog.

Hi Jenna I am glad you are back, gratulations to your 2nd TOTM nominee

I will read your tease later, but the rating (4.3) is awesome, so I know you did a very good job!

Thanks Dark it’s nice to be back. I have kind of fickle tastes, especially for this kind of thing. I’m sure I’ll drop off the map and come back a few times yet.

Ok I did your tease yesterday. I rated it 5 because I loved it. I really felt jealous when i watched "my" girlfriend get fucked by this good looking guy I have to say the blonde model is not my favorite, because the breasts look like they are fake and I like natural women. But the text was great and I felt very, very teased. I really felt like I am the guy in this story and sitting in front of her while she makes "fun" with me.

And if anybody wants to know I choosed to not cum. I still need release and I've just seen you did another part, so I will check it out

This is the story of my life. My wife of 30+ years is my roommate and cooks, cleans and is a great mom. But she gave up sex 10 years ago and I refuse to cheat. Great verbiage, but I hate fake tits, so the pictures were hard to edge to.

phenominal.

not a big fan of fake breasts but the job done on her is phenomenal. not over the top, but look like they are built for speed.

I loved it. Both the woman were hot. The second one, the "wife" is actually one of my favorite pornstars. I also liked the sequel. I hope you do a few more or at least more teases with these kind of hot women.

Loved it gorgeous!

Havnt yet read part 2... Im still catching up on all the teases i have missed

P.S. That guy was smokin' ! I have seen him somewhere... I think he has been in one of mine or john's old teases... Nethertheless.... DAMN!

Thanks for all the feedback. I think I’m going to take a break from the cuckold stories for now. I rewrote the last half of Part 2 a couple of times. The first one had two story lines. One was revealing the wife was cheating on him and going through how it happened in painstaking detail. The other was the neighbor trying to seduce him into being her submissive play thing. With it established that the wife cheats and the teased man is under the neighbors control, I really didn’t know what to do for the second story.

Mz_Teneale wrote: P.S. That guy was smokin' ! I have seen him somewhere... I think he has been in one of mine or john's old teases... Nethertheless.... DAMN!

Hey Beautiful,
Glad to hear from you again. The guy does look very good. He has a tattoo around his ankle and on his lower back though. I can’t help but think his girlfriend is named Jeff or Gary or something.


Addictlion and access_denied I just remembered I had you guys for confession punishments. :-p

The butt virginity still gets me.

yes you did, and i completed mine. not sure about any of the others though.

Jenna wrote:Addictlion and access_denied I just remembered I had you guys for confession punishments. :-p

The butt virginity still gets me.

You are so sentimental. I haven't forgotten you either.....You were my first

edit by dark: fixed your quote

Great tease :)