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FB: Genies Wishes

Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 7:00 pm
by casualthunder
Hi all, would very much welcome feedback for my new tease Genies Wishes which is part 2 of my "Your Choice" set of teases

See Part 1 here... http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=11487

Re: FB: Genies Wishes

Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 11:40 pm
by hhhobo
I know it would be more work, but it would be better if once choices are made, there are a series of the chosen girl, beautful or ugly, with appropriate commands. The basic premise is good, but it needs more interaction once the choice is made.

Re: FB: Genies Wishes

Posted: Sat May 28, 2011 11:48 pm
by casualthunder
Yeah I do see where you're coming from and granted if I had more time I would have included individual commands. However I think the emphasis for the time being is on it being a quick fun time-wasting type of tease where if you are going to cum you might as well have some fun with it....I'm intrigued to know what people actually chose on their playthrough, small or large cock, orgasm or ruined, sexy woman or ugly woman and why these choices were made

Thanks for the feedback :)

Re: FB: Genies Wishes

Posted: Sun May 29, 2011 1:56 am
by dtspam
Well, I feel pretty much the same about this as I felt about your last tease.
The choice alone just doesn't work for me.
It can be a turn on too end up with the old sluty women instead of the young sexy girl, but somehow the tease has to "convince" me to make that choice, by teasing me a while and make me horny enough to want to take the risk of make the "bad" choice in order to get more teasing.
A tease like that would of cause be much more work.

Re: FB: Genies Wishes

Posted: Sun May 29, 2011 2:13 am
by tabbycat
I like the choice, but this one felt lazy compared to the previous one. The writing wasn't as good, and the design was pretty lame. Why do we only pick 1 of 10 pictures? Why not take us through a few pictures once we've chosen a girl?
And what's the point of picking based on name only? More choices based on description would be good. A name on its own is random and doesn't mean anything.

You could fix up the tease a bit, it wouldnt take a long time and with a bit of effort v2 could be really good!

Re: FB: Genies Wishes

Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 5:26 pm
by casualthunder
Thanks for the feedback guys, Overall I understand the points being raised however this tease is drastically different from my previous choice teases as its more of a simplistic choice when you've got a bit of time to kill. I designed this tease in the space of an hour as a kind of stopgap solution between my new tease idea (about role reversal) so it should be considred more of an experiment then a tease and hey, I was bored one afternoon and felt that this was a good outlet for those frustrations :-D

Genies Wishes

Posted: Tue May 31, 2011 11:25 am
by rimboythreeinch
I'd like to see a shemale option along with ugly and sexy women.