Slave to Secretary series
Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 7:31 am
Let me know what you think.
First of all, congratulations on creating a long tease series! I know you had to have put a lot of time and effort into it, and I appreciate it! You really did a great job overall!
I worked through all the teases in this series this morning. Nikki is gorgeous and spending time looking at her is time well spent, and she teases the hell out of us as she makes us work for each new glimpse. I went away from the series wanting to see much more of her!
The series started out very well, with some challenging teasing going on. I'm a fan of having to write on myself (though not with a permanent marker). I'm still wearing my words.
My suggestion for a future series such as this is to make it progressively more challenging. This series started out very hot, but kind of cooled as it went. I felt that it got more and more frustrating because there was too much denial of everything! I ended up just looking, rather than teasing myself. (I know, I'm imposing my preferences for a tease, but this is just my feedback; others may disagree.)
At the end, there were commands to do things with items which I didn't have, and so I kind of became disengaged in the last two teases.
Overall, though, good tease series. I'll do it again, and look for your next work!