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The Librarian
Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 4:11 am
by misspainandpleasure
Please let me know what you think of my first tease. While praise is always acceptable (and appreciated) I would like to hear about what you think I could improve on. Thanks
Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 12:17 am
by dark
Welcome misspainandpleasure!
Seems that your first tease is very popular, the ratings are high. I didn't try out your tease but I will when I have the time. But the list of items makes me scary
Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:36 am
by misspainandpleasure
Thank you. I was afraid it would be a little too much pain and not enough pleasure, but I'm glad that it appears people like it. I hope to hear from more of you.
Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 3:56 pm
by spice23
I think your tease was excellent as well, the votes show that! I like that you seemed to write to the pictures and that always helps to weave the fantasy.
For next time you might include some different aspects of teasing or humiliation, personal favorite, just to explore some other ground. I was impressed that this is your first tease!
Great job and keep teasing all us lost puppies!
Ps. If you do something wrong it is easier to be a critic! lol
Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 4:01 am
by toren1234
I thought that it was pretty great. Granted, I'm not into some of the stuff (ice cubes in the ass etc) but its all good. Really nice job.
Who's the girl? She's smokin hot!
Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 4:54 pm
by lagavulin_nl
It pretty much has everything I like, bit too much pain, but certainly one of the better teases on the site. One of my favorites now.
Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 12:25 pm
by solipsist
It's an excellent tease. My only criticism is that the list of toys is a bit long. Teases that require a lot of toys are great (I've written some myself) but it does exclude a few people.
Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:02 am
by johndoerei
rooster51 wrote:toren1234 wrote:Who's the girl? She's smokin hot!
I second that, do you have a link to hq versions of the pictures please?
Thanks for the tease!
me too! she is really hot! who!!??
Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 5:40 am
by misspainandpleasure
Sorry I haven't been around in while. Real life has kept me way too busy. Anyway, I don't really know who she is. I found her pictures in a folder on my computer that an ex forgot to delete. Decided they would be good to torment you guys with.
Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 5:41 pm
by dark
I finaly read your tease and I liked it! Although I don't have icy hot
Maybe next time you could suggest an alternative punishment for naughty boys who don't have the items you want to use. The writing style was nice and one last thing: I would never use hot sauce on myself. Damn that must be painful