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Don't Worry about that
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 4:38 am
by bloatedballs
what u think ?
Re: Don't Worry about that
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 6:52 am
by billlr
Too short. Not enough of a story.
The girl was hot, though.
Bill
Re: Don't Worry about that
Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 12:00 am
by jeromyjj
yes story was short, but strangely, I really enjoyed it
Re: Don't Worry about that
Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 10:52 am
by MartinC
I quite liked it .. nicely evil selfish girl, and none of that endless "ten strokes of this, 30 of that" stuff.
One thing though ... go into page 6 and change 'seamen' to 'semen' ... I break off being lost in the fantasy when I suddenly get an image of mariners!