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FB: Lexi
Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:02 am
by lockgrid
So I've just published my first ever couple of stories/teases. Hopefully these will get more instructional as they go along, but at the moment they are just setting up the scenario really.
I'd appreciate some comments/criticism so I can make the future installments better.
Re: FB: Lexi
Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:16 am
by elvisomar
Very well done. The set-up was well paced, and LexiBelle is a lovely girl. I'll be interested to see where the story leads us. Speaking for myself, I'd look forward to seeing something a bit longer and more involved, as long as the writing, pacing and tone are as good as your first efforts. Thanks for contributing!
Re: FB: Lexi
Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:13 am
by billlr
Great tease. Great girl.
Can't wait to see where you go with this.
Bill
Re: FB: Lexi
Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:08 pm
by atatflo
I really like your style of writing, keep up the good work! :)
I'd like to know if you are going to publish a third tease in a few days :)
Re: FB: Lexi
Posted: Sat Mar 26, 2011 10:41 pm
by lockgrid
Just published the third instalment of my Lexi series. Hope everyone enjoys.
Re: FB: Lexi
Posted: Wed Mar 30, 2011 10:19 am
by cactusman
Excellent work! I like the series a lot so far.