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FB: Valentine's Day Sex
Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 3:27 pm
by cactusman
I have just published an original tease:
"Valentine's Day Sex":
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=11008
It's a long tease, so set aside some time if you're going to do it.
Also in this tease I'm experimenting with another new (for me) technique for writing, which is to only have the women speak. Please let me know what you think about it, and enjoy!
Re: FB: Valentine's Day Sex
Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 4:25 pm
by wonderbo
Always excited when I see you publish a new tease; can't wait to read it!
Re: FB: Valentine's Day Sex
Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 4:38 pm
by cactusman
wonderbo wrote:Always excited when I see you publish a new tease; can't wait to read it!
Hey wonderbo, thanks much!
(I was very excited by your new teases, and look forward to the conclusion of your Fertility clinic series!)
Re: FB: Valentine's Day Sex
Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:23 pm
by real-webjunky
Hi cactusman,
ok - the tease is well written - as always,
also the story works quite fine, the way to have only the women talk is ok with me
but -
in germany we just had a women die at her xth breast operation when she wanted to have them bigger and bigger.
so i would prefer not to support the trend of breast tuning by having this presented as something positiv in the teases.
each woman is grown different - why can't they be proud of there individuality, but try to get
unnatural, uniform bodies and risk sensitivity and even their lifes for it?
do we (men) have some responsibility for this?
best regards,
webjunky
Re: FB: Valentine's Day Sex
Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:01 am
by cactusman
real-webjunky wrote:Hi cactusman,
ok - the tease is well written - as always,
also the story works quite fine, the way to have only the women talk is ok with me
but -
in germany we just had a women die at her xth breast operation when she wanted to have them bigger and bigger.
so i would prefer not to support the trend of breast tuning by having this presented as something positiv in the teases.
each woman is grown different - why can't they be proud of there individuality, but try to get
unnatural, uniform bodies and risk sensitivity and even their lifes for it?
do we (men) have some responsibility for this?
best regards,
webjunky
Hi real-webjunky. Thanks for the kind words about my tease.
I'm certainly not in favor of women dying, or even of having breast enlargement operations. Any surgery can be risky and some percentage of them will be fatal. I personally prefer natural breasts.
I agree that to some extent men are to blame for this surgery being used, especially by women in the sex industry and in porn in particular.
However, the background of this tease did not include that as an essential element. In fact it somewhat incidentally and accidentally happened in the following way. First, I chose the model to play the wife, Krystal Steal, because I was looking for models for which I had Valentine's day pictures. And she appeared in Valentine's day lingerie with Sky (Lopez), and I thought it would fit in with a story that I invented on the spot. When I found other pictures of Krystal Steal to use in my story, I noticed that it looked like Krystal Steal had in fact had such surgery, as I saw what looked like scars (at least in the original photos). In fact, I thought they were too obvious to ignore... so I incorporated that surgery into the tease, but on only one page. Sorry if this offended you or anyone.
Re: FB: Valentine's Day Sex
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:23 pm
by wonderbo
I thought you did a great job on this tease. The two doggy style segments really drove me crazy. Krystal is in such exceptional shape too! The boob job is a little weird looking, but her ass is incredible. There's no way I would last more than a few seconds if I was doing doggy style with her in real life!
I liked the story idea of fulfilling her fantasy by trying to ignore your own pleasure. That was a good twist at the end too, after sacrificing for her pleasure...well, I won't give it away for others if they haven't read it yet.
Re: FB: Valentine's Day Sex
Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 10:39 pm
by cactusman
wonderbo wrote:I thought you did a great job on this tease. The two doggy style segments really drove me crazy. Krystal is in such exceptional shape too! The boob job is a little weird looking, but her ass is incredible. There's no way I would last more than a few seconds if I was doing doggy style with her in real life!
I liked the story idea of fulfilling her fantasy by trying to ignore your own pleasure. That was a good twist at the end too, after sacrificing for her pleasure...well, I won't give it away for others if they haven't read it yet.
Hi Wonderbo, thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it.
And I'm sure Krystal would appreciate your praise too.
