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Softer Porn: Is it worth the two orgasms?
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:52 pm
by loserDeniedPussy
This is the place to let me know what you did and didn’t like. I really appreciate all of you who read my teases, and I would love to hear what you would like to see in the new ones.
Re: Softer Porn: Is it worth the two orgasms?
Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 12:36 am
by cactusman
loserDeniedPussy wrote:This is the place to let me know what you did and didn’t like. I really appreciate all of you who read my teases, and I would love to hear what you would like to see in the new ones.
This was pretty good. It was also an interesting concept.
However I found not completely involving, probably because it refers explicitly to milovana.com, which takes me out of direct involvement with the story. And some pages have too much text. Also in one place change "mussels" to "muscles."
Re: Softer Porn: Is it worth the two orgasms?
Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 8:43 am
by billlr
The girl in this is absolutely beautiful.
More teases with her in it if possible, please!
Bill