Milovana.com

The title says it all losers.

Eh...

Was that supposed to be a feedback thread to some tease wich everyone would know wo well, that you aint need no title to guess?

Actually, my first sentence was going to be "go f*ck yourself", but I think that's not nice to say.

The newest tease has some very nice pictures in it. The lots of edging just isn't my thing, guess it's not the right tease for me.

Please, start a thread with a normal name next time...

loserDeniedPussy wrote:The title says it all losers.

Gee, someone's got their panties in a bunch!

loserDeniedPussy wrote:The title says it all losers.

OK, this tease of yours is somewhat lacking in imagery

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=10876

Thank you for the feedback everyone, I have to say though I’m surprised by the complaints. I’m here to serve you all by writing teases about female domination and humiliation, isn’t that why you came to this site?

slut slave

i'm confused, you say you're here to *serve* the site in a Dom fashion, so are you sub or dom?

loserDeniedPussy wrote:Thank you for the feedback everyone, I have to say though I’m surprised by the complaints. I’m here to serve you all by writing teases about female domination and humiliation, isn’t that why you came to this site?

slut slave

I "believe" the complaints are about the way you ~demand~ feedback, not necessarily a complaint about your teases...

Now that ~that's~ out of the way, I like the pictures, but each page is kinda wordy.... Maybe the same storyline, with 3x the pages would work a little better.....for me, anyway...

Regardless, I'm pretty sure if everyone thought they were gangbusters, your demanding of feedback wouldn't have been necessary...

loserDeniedPussy wrote:Thank you for the feedback everyone, I have to say though I’m surprised by the complaints. I’m here to serve you all by writing teases about female domination and humiliation, isn’t that why you came to this site?

slut slave

I assume the idea behind title of the thread was that people who like being humiliated enough to do the webteases might also enjoy being insulted on the forum, but most of them probably see a difference between being talked to that way by another male in a relatively neutral space like this and a tease where it's both expected and presented as coming from a woman.

Since you're here to be humiliated yourself the kindest thing might be to insult your work, but I thought they were quite well written. It's a shame you don't actually expect people to do the part with the pool tube. It was the most entertaining idea, though starting with it might make the rest seem relatively tame if the reader survived.

bookworm wrote:OK, this tease of yours is somewhat lacking in imagery

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=10876

The images for that one are hosted on MenInPain.com instead of Milovana so you might want to check if they're being hidden by any ad-blocking software you have installed.

My apologies to the people who were offended by the persona of my tease making its way into the feedback section. I’m new to writing teases and receiving feedback, and I thought readers would want to interact with the same persona that was in the tease. Kind of their own personal domination session with the “Mistress” of the tease. But apparently Milovana readers seem not to want that, I’m genuinely surprised, but I don’t have a problem with using my everyday persona in future feedback sections, since that seems to be desired here.

Lighten up on him guys, he didn't mean to offend.

I’m here to serve you all by writing teases about female domination and humiliation, isn’t that why you came to this site?

nnnnoooooooo.... You should consider that not everyone here is into femdom or humiliation in the first place.

Cross wrote:Drop the attitude, ... or drop dead.

Oh, so your attitude is a prime example of how this man should behave. At least everyone else to comment had the common decency to point out the problem in a civil manner and go about their business.

Your offensive comments were none better than the ones this person made.

Everyone with your type of mentality needs to mellow out. He didn't mean any harm.

LoserDeniedPussy,

I think that, regarding the mistress persona - it was unwelcome because it's a persona. This site isnt really about roleplay - the dominant women here really are dominant women. When subs write teases, that's great (in most cases they write the best ones ) but, in the forum here, people write as themselves, not in character.

And in any case your first post on this thread here was a bit extreme. I realise what you were doing, now, and those harsh reactions really were not justified, but you can see why people would be put-off and confused when someone whose identity is unclear starts barking orders.