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FB: 'A Letter From Miss'

Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:49 pm
by Ford
This one was excellent, too! It's great to see teases with such a good, sexy 'voice' to them, and a real professional quality of writing.

I don't normally 'do' teases anymore, just like to read them. After enjoying the last one so much I went into this telling myself I would follow it to the letter. Lucky then that I didn't have to wait ten days! But the cleaning task was... surprisingly fun. Unusual things like that make the webtease a little different to most, and make the feeling of submission more serious, more real.

If I were to criticise I'd say it was a bit short again, but I guess that was part of the effectiveness of the ending. Anyway - it left me very turned-on and very impressed. Author - good work! Thanks for uploading both of your teases!

Re: FB: 'A Letter From Miss'

Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 12:10 am
by hhhobo
I agree with Ford. This was a lot of fun. I would have liked a few more risky tasks, but it's a great model and very good dialog. Keep up the good work.