Page 1 of 1
FB: 'No More Excuses'
Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 12:13 am
by Ford
That was fantastic
I loved how well-written it was, the 'voice' of the Miss, everything. Well-done and please do write more!
Re: FB: 'No More Excuses'
Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 2:23 am
by Bondageman
I too thought that was a brilliant tease. Really well-written and had me hooked page after page. Proof that sometimes simple is better.
Re: FB: 'No More Excuses'
Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 3:19 am
by ballsfull
Agreed!! VERY well written, and very well done!!!
Nice job, AmberStone!!!
Re: FB: 'No More Excuses'
Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 5:07 am
by ballsfull
Oh man.... Nice job on your second one, too!!
It ended a little toooo quickly for me, but the ending itself was great...
Fun tease!! Thanks!!