giving in to ginger
Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:38 am
Lovely, awesome, beautiful model.The text really needs to be cleaned up.
I looked at the tease
to see how 'bad' it was
the grammer errors where part of her style of speeking and I would not change them!
I can see how the typos might annoy,
like "et"
instead of "Get" (page7)
and
"pussy denied coak" instead of "pussy denied cock" (page8)
and anouther typo on page 9... "chsnce", page 10 "ock"
stuff like "Causing A fire in your Balls"
(instead of causing a fire in your balls ,no caps.)
I would not change, it adds, 'color' to the tease!
If you are truely stunned by typos and/or grammer issues
please RESPECTFULLY send a kind PM to the author
and offer constructive critism, and or offer help to edit the tease.
PS yes I did already send a nice PM to the writer about the typo's