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Salamando wrote: WHERE TO GO FROM HERE
Okay, so here’s the thing. I’m not really sure where to take this. Aside from the premise, there isn’t necessarily a central story here. I have all sorts of ideas for scenes, but all this really amounts to is just continuing to post ever more ludicrous “sex scenes” showing the women use their powers on men. Now, for me, this can eventually just hit a plateau where it kind of just gets repetitive, and I’m not sure how hot it really is for the person. Not that I can’t think of creative things to do, but I want to make sure this sort of thing doesn’t get dull for anyone. So, what would you all like to see?

I could just focus on Angie tormenting Scott all day, with increasingly ludicrous ways of playing with him, maybe bring in a couple of Angies friends to spice things up.

I could try and expand on the world more, maybe show how some women make a sport or amusement of playing with men in special clubs, or otherwise focus on the women teasing multiple men.

I could even try and add a plot to this by, perhaps, showing how the women took over, as the last hold outs of the men and non-powered women get dominated down to the last. Problem there is, that might be a bigger undertaking.

Any other ideas you all might want me to pursue?

I think the story might be a bit too over-the-top, instead of making all females into hyper-powerful goddesses almost instantly, many might not be so powerful. Or instead of having ALL of those powers, some would just have a few of them. Of course, this might result in some sort of hierarchy developing among the females. Or maybe some women develop powers, but they're not dominant, not necessarily submissive either.

And, being an equal rights sort, I'd love to see guys getting empowered, though their powers might tend to express themselves in a different form on average than the average empowered female.

But, actually, I think it might be more interesting to tell stories from the "early days" of the empowerment, when there's only a few of them, and maybe they're not so overwhelmingly powerful. Or perhaps, from a farther future and they've become decadent, using their inferior minions to entertain and serve them.

Hmm... in my usual stories, empowered females, whether they be Sex Mages, witches or psychics, are extremely rare, making their presence all the more intriguing for the people involved. I guess, when every woman and their mother is one, it does take away the "special" aspect.

Still, a big part of why it works for me is the fact that they are overwhelmingly powerful. That's really the entire point. But, of course, the big weakness of that is a) you end up skipping straight to the overwhelming sex pretty much off the bat, and b) try as they might, the men really don't have a single chance in hell, and while that's fine for me personally, I can see how most people wouldn't really go for it. The lead up is what builds the proper tension, and if you start too high, you don't have too many places to go before it all becomes academic.

This set up does pretty much paint me in a corner. On the one hand, I've seen plenty of stories where "the women take over the world" with either their powers, devices, or otherwise, and the whole story is just about a guy or couple of guys getting tormented while the women make fun of/taunt them, so when I was thinking up this scenario, it was more along those lines. But I suppose, with magical powers, there's not even the illusion of a real struggle or ability of the subs/slaves to even try and hold out for very long, so the concept fizzles out quickly.

Hmm...

I think you could go into Angie tormenting Scott really badly and that making Jackie be nice to him and make him cum without Angie knowing... but Angie would find out and plan some sort of revenge... so you would end up having two sex mages fighting with their husbands in between of it all...

Salamando wrote:This set up does pretty much paint me in a corner. On the one hand, I've seen plenty of stories where "the women take over the world" with either their powers, devices, or otherwise, and the whole story is just about a guy or couple of guys getting tormented while the women make fun of/taunt them, so when I was thinking up this scenario, it was more along those lines. But I suppose, with magical powers, there's not even the illusion of a real struggle or ability of the subs/slaves to even try and hold out for very long, so the concept fizzles out quickly.

Hmm...

Not necessarily, you can easily factionalize the empowered. Some might be protective of the unempowered, while some want to use and abuse them. This leaves the men basically helpless, but still leaves a path for men to resist, but not directly. I mean, I *love* the idea of a totally dominant woman, or a small group of them. But you're right, I'd feel a bit cornered too in that setting.

MartinMilovana wrote:I think you could go into Angie tormenting Scott really badly and that making Jackie be nice to him and make him cum without Angie knowing... but Angie would find out and plan some sort of revenge... so you would end up having two sex mages fighting with their husbands in between of it all...

I like this idea. It sets up a scenario where he could get some relief, but she might find out and there would be consequences.

Another scenario might be that Jackie and Angie are friends, and Jackie tries to convince Angie to be a little nicer. Maybe Angie seems like she's thinking about it and starts testing the waters of allowing him release, but for some reason or another is never entirely sold on the idea. Thus, Scott is in the middle of a mind game thinking that things will get better, but they keep ending with a similar result.