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Hey everyone, long time tease fan first time author. I was just curious as to what everyone though or if they had any improvements or suggestions.

It's my first one so don't be too rough!

I thought it was great... definately one of my favorites.

I luved this tease,it's one of my fav's,but here is a suggestion 4 your next one:

Maybe u can make an audio,or flash tease, and this time,and some new storyline to it,(this time maybe u can try making a guy cum in his hand,and eating every drop of it). Or, maybe u can try doing something like the tease: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=10383, have a picture of yourself and give us stroking instructions,until we explode in orgasm.

This tease is one of the best i've ever done,I hope u like my suggestions.

nice tease, keep up the good work :)