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Good effort. A little too short for my tastes.

Personally, I like teases that are a little more story-oriented.

Feel free to check mine out.
I wrote two stories that I am especially proud of: "The Guy Saga" and "Like Strawberries".
Let me know what you think.

Bill

Good first effort.

Keep up the work.

For some inspiration
Pilates has a movement called the
"Roll Over"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4A2ZvNb596I

Sweet. They even have a pilates exercise! =)

billlr wrote:Good effort. A little too short for my tastes.
Bill

I think the tease is short so it is actually possible to do the instructions
While Proping your feet against a wall.

As for not being able to look at the screen,
I believe you should read through the tease until you can remember the fairly brief instructions
and try it.

I don't know if anyone else has done a tease like this. (Points there for new idea)
So you may recieve a bit of negetive posting
Do NOT be intimidated, if you want short, easy to follow instructions
You wrote them, so good job there
feel free to write anouther short tease
(with anouther position, if that's your thing)

I wish I could say I tried this tease
But am still locked up

The model is perfect, and I love it when she talks dirty to me.

It was a great tease, in my humble opinion, though as mentioned, a tad too short for some. On the other hand, it doesn't take as many strokes for some guys as it does for others, and in that difficult position, it's not terribly easy to do a lot of clicking and reading.

I only caught one typo, on the third page (I think) where you wrote "full proof" I presume you meant to say "fool" proof. There may have been others, but I was a little distracted by the pictures.

I rated it a "5" .. probably should have been a "4" but I wanted to try to offset those people who rate a tease low because it doesn't have pictures of cum leaking out of every hole.

Looking forward to more.