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Request feedback from Milovana's female members on this tease. (Men can also comment on it.)
I've entered uncharted territory with this tease.

I know the voice isn't very sexy and I should have included more dialog.

However, were the techniques effective?
Were the instructions clear?
Was the time spent on each technique too long or too short?
Was the tease the right length?

Thanks

Tease removed due to low rating and lack of feedback -both positive and negative.

Pfff... It was only up for a couple of days. Thats not even enough time for the ratings to settle down to an average.

Plus with the teases for girls, I find it takes time for the ladies to 'discover' them. Maybe through word of mouth or whatever.

Also dumb people will rate it low... some guy will open it and go "This tease isnt for me...im not a woman...Ill rate it 1 star!", so dont worry about low ratings on teases made for girls (Or if you do worry about ratings, dont make them because girls teases always get rated lower.)

The low rating was not what bothered me. My self esteem isn't going to be damaged by a low rating. What bothered me was the lack of feedback - positive or negative. Eight people rated the tease. No one commented on it, I sure at least one or two women probably viewed it. About eight hundred looked at it (which is a small group for this site). I agree it would probably take longer for the tease. I'll republish it as a test version and see what happens.

cumhardy wrote:Pfff... It was only up for a couple of days. That's not even enough time for the ratings to settle down to an average.

Plus with the teases for girls, I find it takes time for the ladies to 'discover' them. Maybe through word of mouth or whatever.

Also dumb people will rate it low... some guy will open it and go "This tease isnt for me...im not a woman...Ill rate it 1 star!", so dont worry about low ratings on teases made for girls (Or if you do worry about ratings, dont make them because girls teases always get rated lower.)

masterstroke wrote:The low rating was not what bothered me. My self esteem isn't going to be damaged by a low rating. What bothered me was the lack of feedback - positive or negative. Eight people rated the tease. No one commented on it, I sure at least one or two women probably viewed it. About eight hundred looked at it (which is a small group for this site). I agree it would probably take longer for the tease. I'll republish it as a test version and see what happens.

I think if you check other teases that's par for the course.

les

As a gay man, I immediately jumped in at seeing a male-top tease :P It can always be a little awkward to adapt what's being said to a male body, but hey, I work with what I've got.

I enjoyed the idea of the tease, the robot voice was a nice touch, if perhaps a bit devoid of sensuality. The pictures worked well, too. He didn't particularly seem the dominant type, but nice to look at, nonetheless. The only big comment I have about the tease is that a lot of the timing seems FAR too long. Doing just one action for several minutes at a time, I found myself getting a little bored, and waiting to see what would be ordered next. Maybe this is my male sensibilities of trying to go too fast, but I like it when things are constantly changing, keeps it more exciting and keeps me guessing.

I'd love to see more of this type in the future, so I hope this doesn't discourage you from continuing to try new things. I know it can be hard to get ample feedback despite the number of views a tease gets. (also, if it holds any interest for you, I'm always on the prowl for gay teases :P Swap a couple pronouns, exchange a few body parts, bada-bing, bada-boom, it's done the work for you!)

Keep on making teases you love!
-Tec

Tectonic:

Thank you for your feedback. You've initially confirmed what I suspected - that the time between changes was too long. I debated whether to break a two minute segments into two one minute increments. The next tease I will probably use a shorter segment.

One of the reasons I opted for for a longer time change was a lack of pictures (and laziness on my part). I had trouble finding models with enough satisfactory pictures. I checked some of the gay sites for models but couldn't find anything satisfactory. I sure they are out there - I just couldn't find them. (I found one but I forgot to bookmark it). I finally opted for the Playgirl archives which provided 12 photos. Even many of those galleries were disappointing.