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Futanari Mistress

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:18 pm
by mksl
My first Tease, based on a CyberMistress tease by thrawn.

Feedback would be appreciated


ps: english is not my native language so please excuse spelling & grammar errors

Re: Futanari Mistress

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:59 pm
by jayjaysub
fantastic tease... BUT the questions are way too difficult. Maybe give us a fighting chance... unless the goal is to have us tortured.

Re: Futanari Mistress

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:36 pm
by mksl
What do you mean by that?

Please give an example/suggestion so i can improve the tease

Re: Futanari Mistress

Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:32 am
by alipin
Wonderful scene... :love: Please keep them up. Maybe with real pictures?

I've always wondered how such a scene might unfold with the slave locked in chastity. :w00t: Maybe an extended scene over a few days or weeks with the slave loaned out to other ladyboys; still locked away. :please:

Re: Futanari Mistress

Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 5:40 pm
by dontmindme
I think the ratings speak for themselves. It was a really good tease. I kiind of wish there were a few more hentai teases here. Good work.